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Claire

Introspective, delightfully coy, her shyness enchanted my heart, she wandered along in her own private world quite unwilling to ration a part of her intricate mind full of poems and novels so frightfully arcane they would challenge a D.Phil from Oxon. their mangled motifs to explain. Then I discovered her Achilles heel, the way to steal one little kiss; it was Rilke, he was the key to her soul, rigor mortis to absolute bliss!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/26/2008 9:19:00 AM
Fantastic wordplay, Keith! Warm introductory stanza, fun rhymes and effective and efficient metering combine to make this one irresistible! I thoroughly enjoy the conclusion and the dry wit within that final stanza as well, man! Warm regards, John.
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Date: 11/25/2008 12:54:00 PM
Sure does!!
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Date: 11/25/2008 12:03:00 PM
It is obvious you are a poet's poet, Keith. Thanks for the help with my haiku. They are not my style as a rule. Funny I had counted 7 syllables. does Nature's pause do it for you? Thank you. Joyce
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