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I walk along a busy city street, watching people leave a loud train and all around flows a musical beat and today there is the whisper of autumn rain people are passing- they go and come most wear a dark stone carved face but some give smiles, and some have tears that in my heart leave a trace pale youth stroll with hungry eyes with ideas far-fetched and wild oh, I want to say- don't listen to lies so that in this cruel world you are not reviled ______________________ September 12, 2022 Poetry/Rhyme/City Street Travelers Copyright Protected, ID 09-1486-845-12 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, A Brian Strand Premiere Choice sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 09/13/2022

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Date: 9/13/2022 1:42:00 AM
Lovely poem, Constance, love the heartfelt penetration of facial feelings.
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Date: 9/14/2022 12:59:00 PM
harry, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, blessings ~
Date: 9/12/2022 1:20:00 PM
This is a beautiful, delightful poem, Constance. Observing people on the street is such a pleasant thing to do. Soup Mail.
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Date: 9/14/2022 1:00:00 PM
Milt, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, blessings ~
Date: 9/12/2022 11:43:00 AM
Another thoughtful, poignant poem Constance. Keep hem coming! Linda
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Date: 9/14/2022 1:00:00 PM
Linda, thank you so much for the lovely comment, blessings ~

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