City Memory

Weeping pines
The moon's grin, your last smiles
Fog and cable cars
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
November 29, 2010 at 8:39 PM
Beautiful, Linda
Chappell Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 6:19 PM
i love this image here my friend
Smalling Avatar
November 17, 2010 at 5:34 PM
A very visual piece of imagery, almost like a carving. Thanks for reading and commenting on my work, my friend. Great poetry here you present
Dietrich Avatar
September 15, 2010 at 11:54 PM
Very interesting. Do you do lots of senryu??
La France Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 3:26 PM
Thanks for commenting on my poetry, I find this poem of yours so sutle and visual, you capture much in a few words, well done... love constance
Brown Avatar
August 17, 2010 at 6:55 AM
Just stopping by to remind you of my newest contest The Birds And The Bees. I hope you will enter the contest if you haven't already Linda. Thank you if you have already entered or plan on entering. Love, Carol
Fraser Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 7:26 AM
Many congratulations Linda on your win in Carol's fine contest >> James
Mehta Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 5:39 PM
Congrats on the win, Linda
Freeman Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 5:16 PM
Linda, Congratulations on your success in the contest. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 2:10 PM
Congrats Linda on your winning poem in Carol's contest with this wonderful write and super win today.. enjoy my friend.. another momentous victory...wtih luv..
Brown Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 1:32 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Linda. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 12:06 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Linda. Please continue you keep your pen flowing. Love, Carol
K. Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 1:12 AM
Hi Linda-- nice contrast you put in here-- sad memories though, but very nice haiku--- nikko :)
Mehta Avatar
August 3, 2010 at 7:02 PM
Very expressive images, Linda
Sweetheart Avatar
August 3, 2010 at 1:31 PM
A memory Linda emblazoned in the heart... your words are quite emotional.. enjoyed..with luv..
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