City Lights

City lights on the horizon bright as any star,
But tame, 
Controlled,
Unlike a real star's feirce untamed beauty,
A passing alien might think us a world of stars,
Our people of fire,
Our streets and buildings flames and gasses,
A land fierce and hostile,
Only existing in legends,
Some places have none or very few people of the flame,
But no, 
The city stars are much to white to pass as close stars.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
March 29, 2011 at 7:19 AM
I enjoyed reading your creative poetry today Amelia. Have a wonderful day and may you find even more inspiration to write as the day goes by. Love, Carol
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March 28, 2011 at 4:32 PM
You have worded your verses very well. But please look to the form of Etheree on the poetry soup in case you are interested, Amelia.
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