Dr. Vandana Sharma Poet Other

CITY LIFE

The city with its-
countless people like the stars
some dim some bright, never sleeps

city-road serpents~
drink lives no mercy, no plea
just ultimate, untimed death.


Placed third
28/September/2025
JUST TWO IN ONE SPREE Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud

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Kash Poet October 23, 2025 at 11:16 AM Congratulations!Beautifully penned.

Paige Hind October 18, 2025 at 2:15 PM A worthy winner! Could really the atmosphere Dr. Vandana Sharma October 20, 2025 at 2:19 AM Thank you

Andrea Dietrich October 6, 2025 at 12:32 PM Very nicely done. Big congrats Dr. Vandana Sharma October 20, 2025 at 2:19 AM Thank you

Anne-Lise Andresen October 3, 2025 at 1:55 AM - A lovely description "countless people like the stars", Vandana :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs Dr. Vandana Sharma October 20, 2025 at 2:19 AM Thank you

Valsa George October 2, 2025 at 8:41 PM You have described the hectic and dark side of the city. Congratulations Vandana on your win. Dr. Vandana Sharma October 20, 2025 at 2:20 AM Thank you

Paula Goldsmith October 2, 2025 at 3:10 PM I enjoyed reading your wonderful yet sad "CITY LIFE" write. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a fun day writing away......... Dr. Vandana Sharma October 20, 2025 at 2:20 AM Thank you

Victor Buhagiar October 1, 2025 at 7:25 AM You described road rage perfectly. Dr. Vandana Sharma October 20, 2025 at 2:20 AM Thank you

Eve Roper September 29, 2025 at 10:05 PM Countless people like the stars, city-road serpents~, great imagery of the problem. Dr. Vandana Sharma October 20, 2025 at 2:20 AM Thank you

sara Etgen-Baker September 28, 2025 at 6:24 PM solid contest entry! I wrote mine about Memories of Youth....couldn't get anything to come together for City Life, but you did quite well. Dr. Vandana Sharma October 20, 2025 at 2:20 AM Thank you

William Kelii Kekaula September 28, 2025 at 11:13 AM This nicely reflects your chosen theme. May fortune fair well with thee, Aloha. Dr. Vandana Sharma October 20, 2025 at 2:20 AM Thank you