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City Birds

On a phone call with my brother, With the river at my feet, He was startled to hear birdsong, City avians a’tweet. And this morning, on a lamppost, Sat a regal hawk, intent On whatever he was thinking, As some pigeons came and went. Then this afternoon I spotted, In a garden with my friend, One red cardinal plus sparrows, Nature’s urban dividend. You may be surprised to hear it, But the city’s habitat Gives me lots to make me smile, Long as I don’t see a rat.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 6/27/2021 6:35:00 AM
I love Rat. Roasted over an open fire and seasoned with cactus seed... I remember that meal so well... devoured with gusto, the sun in my hair, sand between my toes... mind you... I had just crawled out of the Sahara desert on my hands and knees. Terry... PS... never, ever, eat the tail or the nose... or anything in between!
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Date: 6/26/2021 9:24:00 PM
Oooh "a rat" - not wanting to see one of these myself. Nice birds though. I enjoy my own cardinals - I have around 9 at a time.
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Date: 6/25/2021 1:31:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem. I'm not a fan of rats either. :-)
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Date: 6/25/2021 11:26:00 AM
Owls love rats, so keep an eye out for them! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 6/25/2021 11:08:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem, felt like me. I love watching birds, they bring much joy to me. We have robins, bulbuls and parrots among other birds. Even I don't like rats.Guess no one does. Have a wonderful weekend.
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Date: 6/25/2021 9:43:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful poem, Ilene. Lots of imagery with a touch of humor at the end. Thanks for sharing, Justin.
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Date: 6/24/2021 11:21:00 PM
Gee. I didn't know that a 'rat' was a city bird. Never saw one with wings. At least, not yet... lol. Good one, ilene. :) gw
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Date: 6/24/2021 8:48:00 PM
Excellent rendering of City Birds ilene, i wonder how many pigeons came and didn't went? Love the rhyme and the rhythm, which flows so well...As for the rat, yes stay way from those...
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