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Ammended 9 11 2012

Cirrus Fledged Cleft

Circa vista under seen

life and spirit flow..

sublime outline forms


little hill folds down..

cross the valley bleating sheep

combs coombe the eyrie hawk..!



copyright Joe Maverick 2011

naturehaiku

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Skat A

Date: 11/11/2012 5:09:00 PM

poor sheep' i think~SKAT~

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 6/16/2012 9:40:00 PM

A far reaching mental view of "little hill" and "bleating sheep". Feeling as though seen as though from a hawk's eyrie? Gives a warm and gentle feel, Joe. I'm sure I'd commented on this one before, but it hadn't shown.:) I'm trying to find ones I've missed, but I do remember this one!! Love, Mikki

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/29/2012 6:23:00 PM

Hi, Joe~once again, it seems as if every poem I click of yours has a comment of mine. Like Andrea, WHOM , I'm just asked to point out a poem, of hers i did not read. Now, I'm asking you, if you can point out a certain poem, you want me to critique all over again. I would like to relax, and comment a poem of yours with , a second thought... please ! Give me a title,, I want to read a poem and give it a hoot of a comment,,, I want to knock your socks off,, with the proper observation on your poem.., if you must know I'm bored, and I read many not so thrilling poems this morning.. well I did enjoy most... anyways..I'll be here till I pass out... like a turkey ....pd

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/22/2012 8:56:00 PM

Yes, joe, we need computers today. That poem I wrote fits my MOM however, almost to a T. Except she is not worried about them. She just avoids them!!

Maria Kyriacou

Date: 3/13/2012 1:35:00 PM

Daver Austin

Date: 3/10/2012 8:29:00 AM

Don't understand the last line, Joe. Please enlighten. LOve, daver

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/29/2012 4:08:00 PM

the second is stronger than the first Joe..they are sweet writes which bring me back to my love for England, Scotland, Wales and Ireland..no other landscapes like them! BIG hugs! Chas wants only 4/6/4 and he won't let me use a picture or alliteration LOL anyway NO matter..we learn we grow! Light & Love

Jack Horne

Date: 2/8/2012 1:24:00 PM

Lovely haiku, my friend

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/6/2012 5:44:00 PM

Just here to say a big HELLO, Joe!! thanks for the comment. I was off for the weekend and now trying to play catch up!!

Judy Ball

Date: 1/28/2012 4:45:00 PM

Thanks so much for your kind comments on my poems. God Bless, JB

Judy Ball

Date: 1/28/2012 4:44:00 PM

Yes indeed. I love looking at the clouds and all the pictures we can find in them. It's so relaxing. Great job here. God Bless, JB

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/26/2012 11:56:00 PM

Joe,, stopping by to say.. lol..i have other comemnts on here.. If i stop by one more time..it's gonna look like spam.. thank you always..p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/17/2012 12:19:00 PM

Stopping by to thank you for your kind comments on my poetry Joe. It is always a pleasure to read your poetry. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/25/2011 11:20:00 AM

Merry Christmas, Joe! No I did not get your soup mail. Did you send it to me this morning. I go through my mail everday... Hope to get it soon... How is your holidays so far... I'm just sitting here in the restaurant... Not busy at all... just a few customers.... Best wishes always,..p.d.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/14/2011 9:25:00 AM

Good morning Joe, stopping by to say hi... and yes, i would love to tell you about my restaurant... especially if you love them waffles house... how are you? Me hanging in there... xox~ always..p.d.

Matthew Anish

Date: 12/10/2011 8:01:00 PM

Stimulating haiku here. I have never seen the word "commbe" before. Thank you for your support! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 12/10/2011 2:48:00 PM

I can almost hear the hawk call, such a strong picture in this ku Joe; I love what you did with this.

James Fraser

Date: 12/7/2011 1:17:00 PM

Reminds me of the newly born lambs in and around Ben Nevis, with various birds awaiting their opportunity to strike. Fine Haiku set Joe :)

Date: 12/6/2011 7:56:00 PM

Nice use of imagery. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. Keep on writing. Karen

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 12/6/2011 11:43:00 AM

You NAILED it on this one MAV! DIGGitt!

Judy Ball

Date: 12/5/2011 11:54:00 AM

This paints a lovely picture my friend. I can see the sheep in the green pature and the hawk circling slowly above. Love it. God Bless, JB

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/4/2011 8:19:00 PM

Hi Joe, how are you? Me,, i'm good... seen your name.. so i thought to click you a hi! I don't know much these days... but, i'm always glad to know who my poet friends are... take care,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2011 4:52:00 PM

If the shoe fits, YOU can wear it. hahaha. I guess a rich dude would not be the "you" of my title in the Christmas wishing poem!!

Joe Maverick
Date: 12/4/2011 6:39:00 PM

Now i'm rich Andrea...? (that means i'm gonn'a have to worry about money...) gosh.! that could affect my poetry..? oh my" you know i'm beginning to wish you hadn't gone and made me all rich..) Andrea (WHAT AM I GONN'A DO) HELP..! HELP..!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2011 3:53:00 PM

I love that line about the little hill folds down. And the imagery of the bleating sheep. I see from remarks below mine that you are still worried about thornton. Gosh, whatever happened? He is one of the best writers here!