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Circus In Town

CIRCUS IN TOWN CIRCUS The big top towers stilt walking clown welcomes one... happiness assured. CLOWN With teardrops falling children uncomfortable... head in lion’s mouth. KNIFE THROWER The hubbub crowd pause blade glistens in the spotlight... anxiousness relieved. HIGH WIRE Life’s giddy balance on the tight rope overhead... one’s ambitions met. LION TAMER The slash of the whip controls the snarl of the wild... giant *****cat. © Harry J Horsman 2012

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Date: 5/6/2012 5:21:00 AM
enjoyed the tale you have presented here Harry,, pleased to read you today..
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Date: 4/27/2012 5:39:00 AM
Well done Harry me at the big top- not one for circuses but you held my breath and emotions, Bren : )
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Date: 4/26/2012 4:59:00 PM
The circus always exciting and it is all here in your words describing some of the more exciting acts. Nice to be a child again Harry.
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Date: 4/26/2012 3:22:00 PM
Hey, you were on top of the BIG TOP contest very quickly. Gosh, I hope I can get to this one! well done, Harry.
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Date: 4/26/2012 2:37:00 PM
Love it Harry....(and all the ***** are well done....."not allowed words",lol...)- oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 4/26/2012 11:52:00 AM
Wonderful poem of Circus in town, left nothing to explain ahead. Enjoyed the Circus practically. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/26/2012 11:47:00 AM
Enjoyed your work that describes the circus so very well..Thanks for the visit to my work..Glad that I offered something new for you to learn..Sara
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Date: 4/26/2012 10:13:00 AM
Smile ˜ Ow I love anything to do with circuses and clowns ˜ I really liked the way in that you described the innocent little babies tripping off of some of the acts ˜ So sweet and lovely ˜ Love always, John!:) ˜
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Date: 4/26/2012 10:16:00 AM
...Googoo Gaagaa )
Date: 4/26/2012 9:59:00 AM
Cool write Harry!! even with the *****. ;) left out.Good thing Mrs. Slokum of "Are You Being Served" isn't on the soup and writing poetry about her *****!! she never added cat after hers ;) Hang in there doll, they will get it fixed--eventually... big hugs,love deb
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Date: 4/26/2012 9:24:00 AM
Soup..I mean
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Date: 4/26/2012 9:22:00 AM
Oh.. Wow..the souo has sensors now... However... I like all your senryu... My fave..is the high wire.. It takes guts I bet to walk the line...enjoyed..pd
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Date: 4/26/2012 8:57:00 AM
Harry I like the poems, I see what you mean about not suitable, what about doing a single one, as for the censoring gheezz talk about dumb....David
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Date: 4/26/2012 8:48:00 AM
I wondered about those asterisks. Other wise, great combo on the circus. I can't remember the last circus, but I doubt my kids ever went to one. Love your poem.
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Date: 4/26/2012 8:40:00 AM
soup has just got to be joking, they have sensored my pussycat. harry
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Date: 4/26/2012 8:38:00 AM
nice write harry - put a smile on my face
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