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Circus Dancer

Wardrobe malfunction…circus seamstress needs sacking ~ Quick … send in the clowns!

Bare breasts are on show ~ cheeks match her red hair ~snow white steed to the rescue!

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2024

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Line Gauthier Date: 9/18/2024 9:17:00 AM delightful ~ Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 9/17/2024 12:32:00 PM Good thing they reacted quickly to the situation and diverted the audience's attention! Congratulations on your creativity, Jan, and the merited fine win!! Hugs // paul Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/13/2024 6:13:00 AM A fun one, Jan. I didn't know people were allowed to do more than one line but I am seeing several like that on the winner list. Belated Congrats on your awesome win and I hope your book is coming along well. Login to Reply

Duke Beaufort Date: 9/2/2024 6:24:00 PM Jan...cute story from a famous art piece. You are astute! Login to Reply

Sam Kauffman Date: 8/31/2024 12:59:00 PM What fun, Jan. Love "send in the clowns." There is a poetic depth to your monoku string and your play on words with strong images. Thank you for sharing this delightful gem! Hugs and blessings! Understand there is seamstress in the unemployment line! High fives and hats off for your win! Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/28/2024 4:47:00 AM Congratulations on your winning work in the contest. Way to go. Sara K Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/28/2024 5:58:00 AM thanks Sara:-) hugs Jan xx

thriveni c mysore Date: 8/27/2024 9:43:00 PM lovely write dear poet, you make us see wrong things at the right time LOL. unique. congratulations, cheers. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/28/2024 3:06:00 AM your comment is comment of the week! Thanks for making me smile! hugs jan xx

Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/27/2024 10:07:00 AM Back with Congratulations on your win. I love your "Circus Dancer" write from the Painting Circus Dancer by Marc Chagall. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write again. Have a blessed day writing away........... Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/28/2024 3:05:00 AM thanks Paula:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham Date: 8/27/2024 6:43:00 AM Lol, a lady godiva moment. Tom Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/28/2024 3:05:00 AM yes i thought of her when i wrote it lol:-) hugs jan xx

Jim Healey Date: 8/27/2024 6:09:00 AM Well done, Jan! Very cheeky! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/28/2024 3:05:00 AM you know me Jim lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues Date: 8/27/2024 5:41:00 AM Love this, Jan, and with your “cheek”-iness! Congrats and hugs! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/27/2024 5:47:00 AM thanks Kim, I like cheekiness lol:-) hugs jan xx

Karen Jones Date: 8/27/2024 4:45:00 AM Back to say congratulations on your placement dear Jan! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/27/2024 5:46:00 AM Thanks Karen:-) hugs jan xx

Hilda Greenhough Date: 8/26/2024 4:00:00 PM There's a lot happening here. I'd advise, circle the ring fast. It is a startling, magical monoku. My compliment to Chagall as well. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/27/2024 5:46:00 AM thanks Hilda:-) hugs jan xx

Joseph May Date: 8/26/2024 11:27:00 AM Tit for tat in the circus game, best wishes in the Contest Jan Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/27/2024 5:46:00 AM ha ha ha thanks Joseph:-) hugs jan xx

Victor Buhagiar Date: 8/26/2024 10:00:00 AM Love your sense of humour. Great Monoku. Hugs. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/27/2024 5:45:00 AM Thanks Victor, i am SO glad Di11y placed me in the contest, i wasn't sure if humour would be appreciated in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/25/2024 1:00:00 PM Maybe just a new boob job that she wants to shine. I know that would be an embarrassing situation for most young women. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Sara K Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/25/2024 2:02:00 PM thanks Sara:-) hugs Jan xx

Karen Jones Date: 8/24/2024 6:46:00 PM Hahaha JanI love this! Great job! I couldn’t get the picture to upload for mine. Good luck! Login to Reply Karen Jones Date: 8/25/2024 7:46:00 PM Oh no Jan I see your picture fine! My dilemma was getting The Fiddler painting to load for my monoku! Jan Allison Date: 8/25/2024 9:52:00 AM oh thats a shame Karen, the picture is called 'circus dancer' do look it up - there is a tiny Pierrot clown on it lol and the rider and horse lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Terry Flood Date: 8/24/2024 4:16:00 PM OMG… NUDITY!!! And me only fifteen (and a bit…). Ha ha… enjoyed… best of luck in the contest, Jan. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/25/2024 9:50:00 AM lol Terry - I had a look at the paintings as I am not au fait with the artist - for some unknown reason this one jumped out at me lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane Date: 8/24/2024 1:57:00 PM Whoa, Chagall painted a Janet Jackson moment before there was a Janet Jackson! His use of pastels is finely painted. Nice Monoku, Jan. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/24/2024 3:09:00 PM thanks Lin - oh gosh yes she had a wardrobe malfunction too lol:-) hugs jan xx

Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/24/2024 12:36:00 PM Your "Circus Dancer" is a wonderful write from the Painting Circus Dancer by Marc Chagall. What a wonderful picture. "Good Luck" I did not see this one when I picked mine. Have a beautiful/blessed day writing away.......... Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/24/2024 12:42:00 PM Thanks Paula, I have never even heard of him until now! hugs jan xx