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Circumstance of France Circumflex Global indifference Uncaring bastards For words and letters Grammar and poetic letters Stealing our roots, our tools Our hats Our very being Taking us for fools We shall overcome this injustice As Rafael Padilla rose above his chains So shall we restore our dignity I fear if we left the kitchen You'd steal our onions too Have you no soul? Do you know how cold the winter with no hat? You say you are the Académie française Yet you protect not the black letters on a page Oh Chocolat! Oh Shame! You care not for the revolution long ago Nor do you care for the heart of Moliere I of all I am shocked To be calling the language police What comfort can you give a word with no hat to wear? Have you no compassion, do you not care? All my life I have dreaded that hat Now that I have conquered my fear You wish to behead the very essence of French Have you no shame? You wish to circumcise the grammar Shorten the learning, make bad spelling no ones blame I stand tall, atop the Eiffel tower I shall protest you, flexing my circumference Making you see the errors of your intolerance To murder such a small hat Of history You only create misery As I open yet another Bordeaux The Circus died yet there is one clown left Notes: This poem is about the removal of the ^ from certain letters in the French language, this was decided in 1990 but only has become “news” now. However like all great ideas I did intertwine others, if you care to guess, and the point of the poem is not to make a point but rather to stir a social discussion on the issues of today.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/7/2016 9:01:00 PM
Ahhhh I've never heard of Rafael Padilla. What a cool story :) Funny ... just recently I watched the movie The Walk. It's about that French tightrope walker, who walked a tight-rope between the Twin Towers, in the 70s, Philippe Petit. It was quite the riveting story, and a whole lot of illegal preparation to perform a stunt that you have a high chance of dying in! I liked it though.
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Date: 2/7/2016 8:24:00 PM
Also I was a bit surprised by what this poem was about. When I read the title I immediately thought of all the tragedies in the news lately ... Charlie Hebdo, and the mass shootings etc., ... but it turned out to be much more lighthearted!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/7/2016 8:54:00 PM
Sometimes is nice to look at lighthearted issues and have a laugh at life! Cheers!
Date: 2/7/2016 8:22:00 PM
I appreciate the explanation at the end (was wondering about "that hat" ... lol). I always thought it strange how the French haven't invented a word for 70! But in a way it's somewhat endearing, because it's that particular culture unique. I feel a strange sort of nostalgia for baseball and how it used to be one of America's greatest past-time (now it's replaced by Football). I'm not even into that sports, for some reason baseball has a strange allure too it. Interesting poem.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/7/2016 8:53:00 PM
Thank you, that was the intention, when you change say grammar or language, is like changing part of your childhood, so even is not a big deal there is emotion attached to it. However I tossed in a side story of sorts about Rafael Padilla, a black Cuban slave, that rose to fame in France as a clown!
Date: 2/7/2016 4:43:00 PM
G'day Arthur ... cultures are dying Arthur. We need a world order like another hole in the bloody head - enjoyed - Lindsay
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/7/2016 5:32:00 PM
Thank you, was just a having a wee bit of fun at the news! :) Cheers
Date: 2/7/2016 3:02:00 PM
Whatever will they remove next Arthur - to remove the 'hat' is to deprive a frenchman of his beret - sacre blue! Hugs Jan xx
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/7/2016 5:31:00 PM
Next they be making the Scots wear pants and not Kilts! :)

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