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Circular Motion

Bleeding, living, dying
Hurting, loving, crying

Emotional distortion
Such a tumultuous portion

Humans in transition
On display, on a mission

Failure, success
One may only guess

Overall it’s underneath
After all it’s all belief

Stuck in motion
Inevitable devotion

Despite what some may feel
We all whirl around the wheel

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/26/2012 6:41:00 AM
Basic cosmological facts poetically and concisely expressed...
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Christopher Stones
Date: 1/26/2012 11:44:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 1/26/2012 12:47:00 AM
Good set of descriptive rhyming couplets here. Glad I read this.
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Christopher Stones
Date: 1/26/2012 1:30:00 AM
Thank you.

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