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Circular Motion

Bleeding, living, dying Hurting, loving, crying Emotional distortion Such a tumultuous portion Humans in transition On display, on a mission Failure, success One may only guess Overall it’s underneath After all it’s all belief Stuck in motion Inevitable devotion Despite what some may feel We all whirl around the wheel

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/26/2012 6:41:00 AM
Basic cosmological facts poetically and concisely expressed...
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Christopher Stones
Date: 1/26/2012 11:44:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 1/26/2012 12:47:00 AM
Good set of descriptive rhyming couplets here. Glad I read this.
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Christopher Stones
Date: 1/26/2012 1:30:00 AM
Thank you.

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