Circular Motion

Bleeding, living, dying
Hurting, loving, crying

Emotional distortion
Such a tumultuous portion

Humans in transition
On display, on a mission

Failure, success
One may only guess

Overall it’s underneath
After all it’s all belief

Stuck in motion
Inevitable devotion

Despite what some may feel
We all whirl around the wheel
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Amadore Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 6:41 AM
Basic cosmological facts poetically and concisely expressed...
Stones Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 11:44 AM
Thank you.
Pettit Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 12:47 AM
Good set of descriptive rhyming couplets here. Glad I read this.
Stones Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 1:30 AM
Thank you.
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