Circling Graphite

When silence speaks
Nothing is heard.
Our breathe is a like a secret
Window, hotly working.
You squinting at a friend and
Trying not to giggle.
Or writing long exams in a room
With circling graphite,
Scantron sheet after scantron sheet.
Or in Mass,
The death knell of silliness,
Leave or lose your wind bag.
Or in your mind,
Be still your mind.
This is the fifteenth line.
Please be still your mind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Puddifoot Avatar
May 16, 2024 at 7:52 AM
an interesting piece, with good use of pared down language - congrats on your placement in craig's contest, and thanks for your comment on mine
Caliri Avatar
May 16, 2024 at 4:12 PM
It was my pleasure, Lady Puddifoot!
Kendrick Avatar
May 13, 2024 at 2:52 PM
Interesting winner. Congratulations. Sara K
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