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we live we sigh we oftimes cry and sometimes weep, as words hit deep... we die sensitive souls, 'neath the veneer, a tear appears then dries... the scar remains festers erupts again,again.... until we choose new birth... we lose

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Date: 12/6/2011 9:20:00 PM
Brian~The last 3 lines summarizes the rest so well. Don't wanna be on the losing side. That's for sure. Like the rhyming couplet of sensitive souls neath the veneer,....a tear..smooth as silk. Gwendolen
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Date: 12/6/2011 6:53:00 PM
Thought provoking write here Brian.Enjoyed.
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Date: 12/6/2011 5:40:00 PM
until we choose .. we spiral. Very nice write, Brian, thanks ~N
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