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Circle Red

Flowing in quiet space, Long luxurious lines defaced. Guided paths that bring me awake. Heart beat pump, and eyes dilate. Miles of purity in its finest taste. In what's described as night. Release. Drifting color, A blur of light. Purposefully we scatter, In hearts we accumulate. Tunnel aimless, Timeless without desire. Filling variables, exchanging place. Gradually we split while we climb, Gathering the pace. Collapsing inward we're lost, Holding on tightly we brace.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/18/2009 5:11:00 AM
good write. love the enthusiasm you put into this one. very very nice hope to read more of your work. Peace Nannas
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Date: 3/17/2009 11:01:00 PM
Great write... powerful and thought provoking. Wonderful imagery. It really flows off of the page, so passionate and truly breathtaking. I especially like the lines that read "Tunnel aimless, Timeless without desire" Beautiful writing here. Smiles from Lolita
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