Circle of Sun - Fantasy Contest
Rabbit’s sitting in a circle of sun
as though they were in school
watching a hula hoop being swung by one
round and round the hoop swung
mesmerizing in its swirl being watched by the cool
rabbit’s sitting in a circle of sun
I watched as they sat entranced in the sun
Playing silly games but always aware and nobody's fool
watching a hula hoop being swirled by one
Mother’s of the rabbits arrived at a run
food in a hamper with cold drinks for the supercool
rabbit’s sitting in a circle of sun
Chase was next on the cards “touch your on”
was the favourite, except for the ones playing boule,
watching a hula hoop being swirled by one.
Next time your near a fairly glen
tip toe in quietly and you might see these cool
rabbit’s sitting in a circle of sun
watching a hula hoop being swirled by one
Penned 30 June 2013
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