Circle of Life, My Foot!

great vision,I like it......

gorgeous! love warm orange and red too!

Thanks George. You really made me smile with this one. Great poem and vivid imagery. Loved it. Nigel

This is certainly a poem for autumn. I can see the leaves falling on the ground. They are of many colors and they are wonderful. This is an excellent tanka. Great job! ~Joseph

George! Your poem is a beautiful satire with impressive imagery and great picturization of autumn. Thanks for your remarkable comments on my poem Magician and Aladin's Wonderful Lamp. -Mohammad

Made me smile, nice to read a seasonal poem that's grounded in reality. Very clever. Regards Heidie

yes this brought a smile, enjoyed this colorful poem that made my day.

Hi George :) The couldn't help but chuckle when I saw the title of this poem. Very catchy! I saw this in two aspects. Literally and metaphorically. Either way, this is a great write! Thank you for the comment on "Poetic Bliss" Cheers, Alana :)

George very nicely done great use of imagery in a small ,but big write! I loved every line! Laura :)

hi George, I love this write, and the metaphors that you use in this write it brings it all together, I can see the picture in my mind, and thank you for your comments, take care D-nyce

I got a good chuckle out of this one. Nice use of personification for a creative flair. The last line is a clincher. Enjoyed this poem. Thank you for sharing it and for your kind comments. Keep up the good writing! Karen

Hello George This feels like home to me here in Alaska today! Fall is such a beautiful time of year with all the blazing colors. I love the line, Grumbling, the leaf falls.....Enjoyed! Take care hun. Many blessings to you and yours. Love Light Truth Patricia