Circle of Life

As a baby, love comes in soft and simple ways
A warm bottle, a hug, fresh sheet on which she lays.
The toddler, she matures, begins to fill her days
Walking so she can grab the toys with which she plays.
By five our sweetheart is eager to face school ways
The gerbil in her class never ceased to amaze.
At puberty, she's in that "I-know-it-all" phase
Any attempt at advice brings a zombie gaze.
When graduate is on her own at last all pays
She becomes a friend you happened to help to raise.
One day she'll say the thing that sets your heart ablaze:
"You're gonna be a grandma," -- one who's earned her praise!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 7:59 PM
Bravo, Cindi. A lovely poem. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Rockwell Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 9:24 PM
Thank you!
Michelle Avatar
February 28, 2019 at 12:35 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest, Cindi! Well done :)
Rockwell Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 9:24 PM
Thank you so much!
Kimathi Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 3:56 AM
Hi Cindi. Congrats for your placement with this flowing, rhythmic verse!!! ;-)
Rockwell Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 8:14 AM
Thank you! Love the challenge of new forms!
Martin Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 1:54 PM
Love this poem - the title sums it up perfectly. Great description of teenagers! Congratulations Cindi! :-)
Rockwell Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 2:16 PM
Thank you!
U.D Palawon  Avatar
January 28, 2017 at 10:07 PM
Oh how you summarised our life, our hopes and expectations, so wisely. Very well done! :)
Rockwell Avatar
January 28, 2017 at 10:25 PM
Thank you so much!
Dietrich Avatar
January 28, 2017 at 7:55 PM
you did really well with the AZE rhyme. Glad to see this one on the winners' list. Congrats.
Rockwell Avatar
January 28, 2017 at 8:58 PM
Thanks, Andrea!
Hamilton Avatar
January 28, 2017 at 7:35 AM
Nice poem nice win!
Rockwell Avatar
January 28, 2017 at 8:57 PM
Thank you. Love the challenge of a new form!
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