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Circle of Gold

A sweet deep voice resonates across the empty air landing affection Caresses the chin forming shapes off ladybugs melodies glide and swirl Guiding soul heart ablaze inside each melody note I hide love supreme Released in cosmic fireworks in the air we share mystical pearl juice honey Under the cascading gems of bright colors we lay gasping excited Through the smoky mist fingers touch I feel a burning heart flowing wild One with your electric current smoldering glazed with a little nibble Enameled glowing gems embraced in the deepest slumber awakens you Entering a world stone buildings either sides magically birds chirping Whistling joyous tunes walking a cobbled path to one beautiful maiden Who turns a handle on the music box enchanting sweetest songbirds air As she opens her mouth out comes the voice of an angel calling enchants Dancing in the heavens of ones mind these eyes are lead astray catching fuel First glance a shooting star joining hands together electrifying crown On parallel world we turn the handle as this sparkle begins floating Inside space fuming embers of magic dust blew open crystal portal Star spangling dewdrops deeply spinning blindly knocked off ones feet in one glance  Sharing our vision a bell strikes raindrops in midnight dreams glass slipper falls Falling all over you lost in regal aura kissed in amazing grace  Spectrum apex walking up steps temple of sacrifice circling moon dog ----------------------- This is an unrhymed quatrain of 18 syllables. The poem style is called 'Circle of Gold' which denotes the total of 360 syllables count from all 20 lines. A collaborated poem with Liam McDaid. Poem style invented by Liam McDaid. I was inspired by this music video "Flamme à lunettes" and Liam kindly accepted to collaborate on this. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ej6gP7snEko

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Date: 6/6/2016 3:35:00 AM
Thank you angeline a pleasure reading this again your pen sparkled beautiful in this I pray you have a blessing of a day
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Date: 5/30/2016 12:29:00 PM
Outstanding Quatrain write here Angeline and Liam!! The imagery and the supporting metaphors are quite excellent. Great work on this one guys!! TR/FAV!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Angeline Haikutwinkle
Date: 5/31/2016 8:39:00 AM
Thank you kindly Mr Bateman