Circle

1st verse:

And love is but a petal falling to the ground
though it wilts when not on the vine
it's roots are safe and sound
it's true that if nature had the time
it could tear that all apart
but I guarantee you that's not me
if I hear you call as will an arrow I will dart
and the righteous you will be

2nd verse:

It may seem we're in a dry spell
but it's drenched with the morning dew
it may feel as does an empty well
but baby that's not true
hold me through the labor
as a baby seeing the flicker
of it's first glimpse of a layer
of time coming quicker

Chorus:

Let it bloom in the moonlight
let it blow through the storm
leave it all behind with insight
restrain me only warm
soft pillows of moonlight
may it show sweet and warm
sunshine on me bright
with kisses I adorn
and hope will settle us in the sound
though it tilts there's still a sign
it suits us perfectly round
for you I'll draw the line

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Date: 7/1/2021 12:37:00 PM
"Beautiful" It needs music. Have a blessed day writing away......................
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 8/2/2021 4:35:00 PM
Thank you Paula :)
Date: 5/1/2021 12:58:00 PM
Chorus is so sweet. Beautiful imagery. Smooth flow... Indeed a beautiful song
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 6/7/2021 11:30:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 4/25/2021 11:43:00 AM
My favorite part is the second verse. Another potent write from your pen. Blessings Rick.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 6/7/2021 11:30:00 AM
Thank you Richard :)
Date: 4/12/2021 1:32:00 PM
Your poems are extremely imaginative you are a poetess who was born to be such - stupendously powerful! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 6/7/2021 11:30:00 AM
Thank you Jennifer :)
Date: 4/11/2021 8:30:00 AM
Really lovely pen Angela, so vivid and full of great imagery too. Hope you're having lovely weekend, Blessings be yours, Gordon
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 6/7/2021 11:19:00 AM
Thank you Gordon :)
Date: 4/11/2021 12:56:00 AM
This is beautiful, Angela! All it needs now is for someone to put music to it! ~ Warm regards // paul
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 6/7/2021 11:18:00 AM
Thank you Paul :)
Date: 4/10/2021 7:27:00 PM
I too, love the imagery here, Angela, the poetry so profound and powerful.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 6/7/2021 11:18:00 AM
Thank you Harry :)
Date: 4/10/2021 5:15:00 AM
This is a wonderful, meaningful, song Angela. Enjoyed the rhythm you created in these verses. You held my attention from start to finish. So well written!
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 6/7/2021 11:18:00 AM
Thank you Vijay :)
Date: 4/10/2021 2:21:00 AM
This is nice one here. I can't just get enough of it. I hang on to every word. Want more and more.. Blessings
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 6/7/2021 11:17:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 4/9/2021 1:53:00 PM
Hey I really missed your poems... So great to see you still posting .
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 6/7/2021 11:17:00 AM
Thank you Silent One. Glad to see that you're back! :)
Date: 4/9/2021 10:17:00 AM
There is so much imagery in this verse. The part of the vine is what I like best. But the rest is great too.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 6/7/2021 11:16:00 AM
Thank you Victor :)
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