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"Circadian"
In the garden I planted for you, somewhere in the unplundered Territory of Hypothalamus, I found a flower who’s name was You Wouldn’t Know the Truth “God Help Us” cried the lost Praying Mantis, “Hear this, the journey towards Light incurs a deep dive into Dark Matters bleak, there in the centre of betrayal and lies of unseen deeds, sorrow and hell fires that block all escape through the soggy tear-stained pillows overflowing into those other souls' dreams, damned and crying, lives falling like ashes from ripped and scattered dog-eared pages, books and books of unknown facts are found when you float with her down down down in that awful half-way place, a boat with Black Hooded Habit stands beside her on the never ending journey, like ghosts you are all alone, watching what she sees mute in the loud silence along the unwelcome River Styx, well outside the boundaries of her dreams - there you will find what needs to be considered factual and habitual continually beating its telepathic message out like a booming battalion of drums, day in and night out it drums and it incessantly bangs peace out, circadian, a seed like a key, bats chirping around it with their sharp teeth dripping canards, a bird wingless not an angel bleeds, tarred and feathered, torn it turns in a not so gentle bed in that old moulding House of Cards looking for the one heart that sees hers and turns the key; there inside you will see the only bloom that is worth her existence, the one truth that is worth a trollish damn, and there it burns the reality of bitterness, to spread a warm safe unsafe blanket over the roots, stories, like veins, hyphae spreading and reaching out and up to the only commodity that through Truth matters - LOVE tattooed across the mind and felt through the darkness like braille along satin skin and penetrating the naked breast, jigsaw words spoken in tongues strange and foreign - there, thoughts are finally undressed caressed and silver bullets kept for keeps with ripe kisses wet and deep "What a crazy world this is", you say "What an unlimited life", she says "struth, that flower, potent with the perfume of its blatant message - Love is found through Truth" In the garden I planted for you, somewhere in the unplundered Territory of Hypothalamus, I found a flower who’s name was You Wouldn’t Know the Truth (LadyLabyrinth / 2020)
“And now here is my secret, a very simple secret: It is only with the heart that one can see rightly; what is essential is invisible to the eye.” “All grown-ups were once children... but only few of them remember it.” “It is the time you have wasted for your rose that makes your rose so important.” Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

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Date: 10/30/2022 4:50:00 PM
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Date: 7/16/2020 8:31:00 PM
I so truly stand in awe of this fantastic piece my friend. A dream for a Poe-like dance. A flying carpet and a golden sword. Life within the realm of inner dimensional plunder. "Quick said the worm, let me find my hidden wings.".. A gleaming gem and a fav.... I read this one three times.. God bless..
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Robert Lindley
Date: 7/17/2020 7:46:00 PM
Yes they always are. That is why strict form book poets too oft fail to impress with compositions- they seek perfect form over that of heart and soul in the write, imho. The best poetry flows from a willing heart like a waterfall. As the heart beats out words, the tuned ear hears. The soul runs ahead guiding and the brain activates. Sometimes the dance needs not the music, but it always needs the heartbeat! God bless..
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 7/17/2020 11:31:00 AM
It is a fantastic piece. Fantastic pieces are written from the 'true heart', are they not? I read many poems here. Many written from the 'true heart', the 'true voice'. In that domain, the best stories delivered.
Date: 7/16/2020 8:06:00 PM
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Date: 7/13/2020 8:09:00 PM
I love it M x
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 7/16/2020 5:41:00 AM
It's a grisly story.For those who like to write about "truth",sometimes TRUTH is stranger than "fiction".
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 7/16/2020 5:41:00 AM
Many poets/writers, write their personal fictions peppered with their "truth". It's an addiction. Camouflaged Chameleons, ignoble and noble, they debate with themselves constantly like a broken record. Bang it up against a wall, done and out of mind's sight for a while. It's a true mind f***. But the constant theme (negative and positive), will raise its head again and again. This is what most poets & writers truly are, escape artists,ptsd/cptsd,repetitive, captured in a cycle,whether they have the honesty to confront themselves with that fact,reality or not.It's a means to make sense of their dreams and the world they find themselves truly living in.I read that question,"What makes a good poet? What makes poetry good?"
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 7/16/2020 5:39:00 AM
The common denominator, that 'theme' that raises its head again and again, in the majority of poems that are worth a jot, bled from more than most here, a quest they are on to depart from or drown in a hidden saga, a reaching for absolution or a quest for romance & its saving grace,something beautiful, brighter - is "LOVE", that is the common denominator; and Love is imprinted in all its guises - poetry/writing - when one contemplates the answer to that nebulous question. To me, that's what makes poetry good, the ability to laterally deliver a story out of love, truth, positive or negative.Limericks aside of course...but then again...
Date: 7/13/2020 3:25:00 AM
A mystical poem well written, Lady Labyrinth:)
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 7/16/2020 3:20:00 AM
Thank you Jo Daniel.

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