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Cindrella Returned

Falls in love, silent, soft, lone glimmering moon, lunatics enamored in her magic spell Her frenzied craters, gale silver scaped lagoon, beguile ocean and sand, they spin carousel. Unscathed visage, unlocks heart, they throb in swoon pearls in ballerina, radiance excel. Oh! Resplendent flicker in night sky is gone!! Cindrella returned.. from ballroom, before dawn. PLACED FIRST IN LIQUID LUNA CONTEST PLACED FIRST IN Brian Strand 's Contest PS syllable counter 11 in each line. Rhyme ababab cc 4th March 2019 Chantelle Anne Cooke's Liquid Luna Lace contest

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Date: 3/18/2019 12:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine with with such a beautiful Rispetto.
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 3/18/2019 12:55:00 AM
Thanks Subimal, your visit is a big encouragement for me to write.
Date: 3/12/2019 10:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win, my friend! lovely!
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 3/18/2019 12:56:00 AM
Thanks Caren for the heartwarming wishes, you have showered me with praises for some other poems, its an honor dear friend, love and hugs
Date: 3/12/2019 7:22:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Debjani. Well done.
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 3/18/2019 12:58:00 AM
Thanks friend for taking out efforts to compliment for this and other poems
Date: 3/7/2019 7:02:00 PM
So beautifully expressed, and with such depth. Your thoughts touch the page with elegance and grace. Congratulations Debjani, on this win. ~ Brandy
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 3/18/2019 12:59:00 AM
Thanks so much Brandy, feels so good that you liked it and took time out for the kind appreciation
Date: 3/7/2019 5:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Debjani, beautiful and moving write. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 3/18/2019 1:06:00 AM
Thanks Eve, feeling elated that you liked
Date: 3/6/2019 11:17:00 AM
Congrats. SK.
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 3/18/2019 1:06:00 AM
Thanks so much Sara

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