Debjani Mitra Poet Rispetto

Cindrella Returned

Falls in love, silent, soft, lone glimmering moon, 
lunatics enamored in her magic spell
Her frenzied craters, gale silver scaped lagoon, 
beguile ocean and  sand, they spin carousel.
Unscathed visage, unlocks heart, they throb in swoon
pearls in ballerina, radiance excel.

Oh! Resplendent flicker in night sky is gone!!
Cindrella returned.. from ballroom, before dawn. 





PLACED FIRST IN LIQUID LUNA CONTEST
PLACED FIRST IN Brian Strand 's Contest

PS syllable counter 11 in each line.
Rhyme ababab cc
4th March 2019
Chantelle Anne Cooke's 
Liquid Luna Lace contest

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Subimal Sinha-Roy March 18, 2019 at 12:50 AM Congratulations on your fine with with such a beautiful Rispetto. Debjani Mitra March 18, 2019 at 12:55 AM Thanks Subimal, your visit is a big encouragement for me to write.

Caren Krutsinger March 12, 2019 at 10:09 PM Congratulations on your well deserved win, my friend! lovely! Debjani Mitra March 18, 2019 at 12:56 AM Thanks Caren for the heartwarming wishes, you have showered me with praises for some other poems, its an honor dear friend, love and hugs

Line Gauthier March 12, 2019 at 7:22 PM Congrats on your win, Debjani. Well done. Debjani Mitra March 18, 2019 at 12:58 AM Thanks friend for taking out efforts to compliment for this and other poems

Brandy Nicole March 7, 2019 at 7:02 PM So beautifully expressed, and with such depth. Your thoughts touch the page with elegance and grace. Congratulations Debjani, on this win. ~ Brandy Debjani Mitra March 18, 2019 at 12:59 AM Thanks so much Brandy, feels so good that you liked it and took time out for the kind appreciation

Eve Roper March 7, 2019 at 5:14 PM Congratulations on your win, Debjani, beautiful and moving write. Hugs Eve ~`* Debjani Mitra March 18, 2019 at 1:06 AM Thanks Eve, feeling elated that you liked

Sara Kendrick March 6, 2019 at 11:17 AM Congrats. SK. Debjani Mitra March 18, 2019 at 1:06 AM Thanks so much Sara