Cindrella Returned

Falls in love, silent, soft, lone glimmering moon, 
lunatics enamored in her magic spell
Her frenzied craters, gale silver scaped lagoon, 
beguile ocean and  sand, they spin carousel.
Unscathed visage, unlocks heart, they throb in swoon
pearls in ballerina, radiance excel.

Oh! Resplendent flicker in night sky is gone!!
Cindrella returned.. from ballroom, before dawn. 





PLACED FIRST IN LIQUID LUNA CONTEST
PLACED FIRST IN Brian Strand 's Contest

PS syllable counter 11 in each line.
Rhyme ababab cc
4th March 2019
Chantelle Anne Cooke's 
Liquid Luna Lace contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 3/18/2019 12:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine with with such a beautiful Rispetto.
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 3/18/2019 12:55:00 AM
Thanks Subimal, your visit is a big encouragement for me to write.
Date: 3/12/2019 10:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win, my friend! lovely!
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 3/18/2019 12:56:00 AM
Thanks Caren for the heartwarming wishes, you have showered me with praises for some other poems, its an honor dear friend, love and hugs
Date: 3/12/2019 7:22:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Debjani. Well done.
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Date: 3/18/2019 12:58:00 AM
Thanks friend for taking out efforts to compliment for this and other poems
Date: 3/7/2019 7:02:00 PM
So beautifully expressed, and with such depth. Your thoughts touch the page with elegance and grace. Congratulations Debjani, on this win. ~ Brandy
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Date: 3/18/2019 12:59:00 AM
Thanks so much Brandy, feels so good that you liked it and took time out for the kind appreciation
Date: 3/7/2019 5:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Debjani, beautiful and moving write. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 3/18/2019 1:06:00 AM
Thanks Eve, feeling elated that you liked
Date: 3/6/2019 11:17:00 AM
Congrats. SK.
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 3/18/2019 1:06:00 AM
Thanks so much Sara
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