Cinderella Bites Back

Cinderella Bites Back
Joanna Davis


Once upon a story; in a fairy tail.
Lived a shy and lonely girl,
Who's friends were Mop and Pail. 
She was really quite a clever girl,
But suffered hate and spite.
Until an invitation came,
And she wished with all her might!

‘if only I could go to the ball,’
She cried, when no one was around.
Then out of a tiny hole, 
She heard the faintest sound.
'Of course, you can go to the ball,
What makes you think you can't?'
'Just because that witch said no,
Doesn’t mean you shan’t!' 

'But my dress is in rags,
My feet dirty and bare.
There's nothing in my closet,
That I could really wear'.
‘Don't worry’, said the little mouse,
For I know just the thing.
By the time I've finished,
You’ll have a wedding ring. 

'Oh no’, said Cinderella, 
That's not what I had in mind.
I was rather hoping for a career;
A chance to serve mankind.
The mouse thought for a moment, 
Sized up her situation.
'It’s not a wardrobe you need,
 It’s an education'! 

So when you read this story,
Or listen to this tale.
About a sad and lonely girl,
with a mop and pail.
Remember, that the dream you wish,
Or star, you hope to find.
Has always been there with you,
Tucked safely in your mind!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Perna Avatar
December 14, 2022 at 4:45 PM
Lovely written! Amazing, great message!
Rebstock Avatar
August 18, 2019 at 1:10 PM
Very creative and thought provoking for a young girl has many options besides looking for Prince Charming. Enjoyed.
Davis Avatar
August 20, 2019 at 4:01 PM
Thank you Shirley, glad you enjoyed the real Cinderella :)
Anonymous Avatar
August 5, 2011 at 3:03 PM
Left me with a big big smile!!! Thanks, I'm definitely favoriting this
Williams Avatar
August 5, 2011 at 2:12 PM
hey Jo, nice twist, David
Ayinla Avatar
August 5, 2011 at 1:40 PM
Ah! learnt something new.
Warden Avatar
August 5, 2011 at 1:22 PM
Enjoyed this Jo,....Good write on Cinderella..hugs
Ratliff Avatar
August 5, 2011 at 1:19 PM
Wonderful,nice turn on the story,love it!
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