Cigarettes and Chocolate

I once had a lover who was a smoker
I told him I really wish he’d quit
The smell alone was quite a choker
And his clothes were full of it
I knew he was addicted and afflicted 
So I tried to inspire change
Gave him a sucker hoping he’d lick it
Maybe retrain his smoker brain
When that didn’t work I continued to search
For he was my sun on cloudy day
His feelings I didn’t want to hurt
But kissing is like licking ashtray
So let’s try acupuncture this time
With a little luck and love you can
Beat this habit that should be a crime
To market or sale to woman or man
This really helped and he does well
His cravings are less with a stick
He turns to me all smoke free saying
What about your addiction to chocolate
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Delegans Avatar
January 23, 2024 at 9:11 PM
Love this! Brought me back to an old relationship.
Jones Avatar
January 23, 2024 at 10:10 PM
Aw so glad you enjoyed it!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 9:39 AM
LOL! My daughter wanted her husband to quit and thought of her addiction to sugar and thus she worked on her own habit and her husband has been smoke free for a year. How about that! Love your poem!
Jones Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 10:22 AM
That’s wonderful that he quit! Thanks for sharing and for reading.
Cunningham Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 8:53 AM
Yikes, I know what you mean Karen, one time it was the norm to smoke. Best thing I ever did was give up now I can't stand the smell of them. Tom
Jones Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 10:21 AM
So glad you quit Tom! They should be outlawed.
Volumes Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 8:37 AM
Dear Karen I am the wife of a smoker. I can empathize with this wonderful poem. It's wonderfully written and I adore the last line especially. A terrific rhyming poem. I love it.
Jones Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 6:07 PM
I’m sorry you have to deal with his smoking and second hand smoke. Glad you like it and thanks for reading Speaks Volumes.
Poet Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 7:09 AM
Your poem showcases exceptional artistry. Karen, the scent of cigarettes is indeed perturbing to a multitude of individuals. I wish he has renounced smoking at this juncture.
Jones Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 7:35 AM
Thanks Sotto Poet I hope he has too!
George Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 3:26 AM
The smell of cigarette is annoying to many ! Hope he has quit smoking by now ! Have a great New Year Karen.
Jones Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 3:30 AM
I don’t know if he did. This was a past relationship. Yes annoying and gross cigarettes are! Thanks for reading Valsa!
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