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This is a Shakespearean sonnet to my daughter, Ciel, on her fifteenth birthday. Among her many musical talents, she sings as well. Soccer reference you'll see. The Airbnb reference is an inside joke because Ciel is now our official vacation travel planner and she starts by finding a beautiful place to stay on Airbnb and plans the whole vacation from there. Lol. Love that girl!!
 

 

Ciel, on your birth day ‘twas true to say Heaven’s bright light rays rain’d down from above Fast forward to fifteen years to the day Now it’s you that brings light, laughter, and love Kind, calm and caring, words under control Wait! Who’s that fleet girl in cleats with the ball?!? Rocket shot from right wing shoots straight to goal Through back of the net...ball, keeper and all French horn, piano, and ukulele Swimming with sea turtles and manatee Beautiful music and places to stay Your trips oft start with Airbnb Beacon of bright light for love, hope, and peace Sweetest of sweet hearts, our Ciel Elise

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Date: 12/31/2020 3:31:00 PM
A very thoughtful write. I believe you captured the loss and identified her passions as well. I am looking forward to more of his writings as I have experienced the same feelings for the loved one I loosed. Excellent, George.
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Date: 12/31/2020 3:33:00 AM
A very sweet tribute to your daughter!
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Date: 12/30/2020 9:55:00 AM
This is what life is suppose to be like. Well done.
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Date: 12/30/2020 9:09:00 AM
You are fortunate to have such a young lady. A great tribute to her. ~~
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Date: 12/30/2020 8:24:00 AM
What a beautiful poem dedicated to your daughter. And so well-crafted, too, Perrin.
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Date: 10/11/2020 12:25:00 PM
Lovely gift for her
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