Church On the Bluff

"Upon this rock I will build My Church!"

There it perched upon a bluff high above New England's rugged shore.
Its glass-stained windows, now shuttered, were closed forever more.
What once had been a vibrant house of worship now stands forlorn,
Surrounded by wind-swept cedars, a few wild roses and brambly thorn.

'Twas during a Sunday morning stroll that I came upon this pastoral scene.
A congregation of one, I communed with the past on what once had been.
I felt a kindred spirit with those now gone as I mused about times of yore,
And listened to the soughing winds and the oceans booming roar!

I pictured 'all day meetin's with dinner on the grounds' by the congregation.
I could sense the pastor's sermons dealing with the devil and damnation!
In my mind's eye I saw happy brides and grooms on their wedding day,
And little children reciting The Golden Rule and learning how to pray!

I saw happy families arriving on Christmas Eve by horse drawn sleigh,
To enjoy the candlelight service and the Sunday school Nativity Play!
The old church must have also been a beacon of hope for seafaring souls,
Who after sailing upon the billowing seas neared those treacherous shoals!

A long-abandoned graveyard with moss-covered stones was situated nearby.
Alas, names etched upon the stones were eroded and many stood awry.
Though long forgotten by man, He knows the names of each and every soul,
And they'll join Him with the elect when Gabriel sounds that triumphant roll!

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Placed No. 2 in Constance's "The Church By The Ocean" Contest - October 2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 11/4/2012 5:50:00 PM
Very nice Bob!! I also am retired Air Force. God bless!!
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Date: 10/6/2011 9:43:00 PM
great entry, congrats on your well deserved win Bob
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Date: 10/5/2011 7:47:00 PM
Great interpretation of the contest. Congratulations Bob. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/5/2011 5:14:00 PM
Congrats Bob on a wonderful well deserved win with these brilliant lines of exquisite expressive poetry my friend in Church by the Ocean.. as always.. lovely ...
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Date: 10/5/2011 1:14:00 PM
Well written, Bob. Congrats on your win! Kim
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Date: 10/5/2011 10:59:00 AM
You took me there with you Robert. Well written. Happy to share second place with such a great write.
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Date: 10/5/2011 8:23:00 AM
Terrific Poem Bob. I loved it. Tony
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Date: 10/5/2011 1:35:00 AM
Such a beautiful and visually rich write. many congrats.
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Date: 10/4/2011 1:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in "The Church By The Ocean" contest Bob. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/28/2011 8:58:00 PM
Great poetic sermon!! Well penned as usual.....how long have you been a writer? You are a pro!!
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Date: 9/26/2011 11:10:00 AM
Just reaches out to me in that special way you bring to all. Dear Bob, this touches my inner being with the echoes of times gone paast. Beautifully done! :)
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Date: 9/24/2011 5:02:00 PM
Ahh yes Bob, you are feeling it here.. in find so much to empathise with also, in this exquisite piece full of values...we just have to reach out..its up to us.
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Date: 9/24/2011 10:17:00 AM
Thank you Bob. I walked with you. Tony
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Date: 9/23/2011 11:44:00 PM
I love the splendid ending you gave to your poem, how He will remember every one of them though their names are eroded on the gravestones. Constance has her job cut our for her judging THIS contest.
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Date: 9/23/2011 10:09:00 PM
Great write Bob! By the way here is the link to my Poem on Bar D! http://www.cowboypoe...mikefrancis.htm
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Date: 9/23/2011 6:24:00 PM
When that trumpet sounds, will we be ready?..Great one on a topic that rural America faces as youth moves away to find jobs and action..Enjoyed..I am glad that I chose this one as oneof those that I could read today..Sara
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