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Chrysanthemum

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CHRYSANTHEMUM Chrysanthemum, chameleon joy King’s pleasure bud, a golden boy A southern belle, snowball whiteout Perfect for a desired night out Welcome to her flirtatious ploy Flashy pretty petals, not coy A Purple frill ~ edged daisy joy Fall dance of November hues shout ~ Chrysanthemum ~ Autumn flower tattooed with koi Mums by that special girl or boy A necklace purchased at the checkout And love is what it’s all about Riveting petals of great joy ~ Chrysanthemum 7/17/2017 Rondeau Form

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John Hamilton

Date: 8/6/2017 3:51:00 PM

Thanks Kim for entering this beauty, not too familiar with the form, probably another form would lend itself to easier flow, and rhyme but all in all I enjoyed the read, congrats on a nice placement!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/6/2017 3:53:00 PM

Thanks, John!

Ra Shagun

Date: 7/21/2017 9:17:00 AM

A great poem Kim congratulations For this win.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/6/2017 3:53:00 PM

Thank you :)

Afzal Nusker

Date: 7/20/2017 1:51:00 AM

I love this Lovely Rondeau. Congrats on your win, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/20/2017 11:29:00 AM

Thank you, Afzal!

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 7/18/2017 11:31:00 PM

Congrats, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/19/2017 11:26:00 AM

Thank you :)

Janis Thompson

Date: 7/18/2017 1:52:00 PM

A great tribute to the mums. Well done and congrats, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/18/2017 8:07:00 PM

Thanks, Janis!

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/18/2017 9:46:00 AM

A lovely autumn gift that is a favorite of mine,.....and one that keeps giving year after year. Nicely done, Kim !!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/18/2017 11:57:00 AM

Thank you, Carrie!

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/17/2017 10:23:00 PM

Hi Kim, I love it!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/17/2017 10:48:00 PM

Thanks, Susan!

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/17/2017 6:23:00 PM

Beautiful lines Kim. I like how you put this together. :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/17/2017 6:35:00 PM

Thanks, Heidi!

Chris Green

Date: 7/17/2017 5:48:00 PM

This was a beautiful poem Kim. The chrysanthemum is such a versatile and wonderful flower. I can see the different occasions this flower is used in your poem. Really nice.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/17/2017 5:49:00 PM

Once in a while I write a formal poem! Was fun. Thanks, Chris!