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Chronological Genocide

Tin-canned umbrellas Snail and glitter proper names Waiting for a train

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 11/2/2009 9:16:00 AM
interesting lol
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Date: 7/2/2009 1:12:00 PM
mysterious and clever,smart indeed---charma;)
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Date: 6/30/2009 4:47:00 AM
Cesar Its nice to see your back XD Long time no see braw,P.s Love this one!=)
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Date: 6/29/2009 4:10:00 AM
This went into my brain and caused a gust of blood...
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Date: 6/27/2009 10:16:00 PM
I am trying to capture the picture ... the train slowly moving into the station ... love the mystery in the imagery. One love
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Date: 6/25/2009 3:26:00 PM
Smart Haiku Cesar>>James
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Date: 6/21/2009 3:51:00 PM
hmmmm. Light & Love
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Date: 6/20/2009 9:29:00 PM
Amazing words, Cesar! Excellent haiku. Happy Father's Day, Cesar. Enjoy your day! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/16/2009 4:09:00 PM
Interesting perspective and good use of imagery in this concise poem. Keep on writing! Karen
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