Chronic Acid Reflux

A perfectly predictable purplish tabby cat misbehaves
Dancing across magnificent magpies excavated graves
Squirming yellow shining housefly larvae she enslaves
Swimming  through thick sticky b-positive tidal waves
A polka dotted butterfly with stiletto and cream shaves
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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January 11, 2011 at 7:18 AM
A fanciful poetic way to describe Nexium in action. Just correct three misspelled words in your third line: "shinning", "housfly", and "larve" should be corrected as "shining", "housefly", and "larvae" respectively. Everything else looks good.
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