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Chronic Acid Reflux

A perfectly predictable purplish tabby cat misbehaves Dancing across magnificent magpies excavated graves Squirming yellow shining housefly larvae she enslaves Swimming through thick sticky b-positive tidal waves A polka dotted butterfly with stiletto and cream shaves

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/11/2011 7:18:00 AM
A fanciful poetic way to describe Nexium in action. Just correct three misspelled words in your third line: "shinning", "housfly", and "larve" should be corrected as "shining", "housefly", and "larvae" respectively. Everything else looks good.
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