Chrome Layers of Autumn

Autumn, wrap me in the fabric of uncoated leaves
just for this unequaled waning eve
as  orchids rest beneath viscous cloudbursts:
I feel distanced from the elements of earth
while stars blink dimly     my hands cannot reach,
then come for me     be the thread  binding me till
 
your layered  air cuddles my arms in  moss of dew,
if only to taste this vanishing light in your hour
and gaze longingly at the rainfall of your skies;
when all this patina of boughs' mystique aligns
with the final throb of chrome- like days:

O  let morning withdraw against  your faded lacquer
to  allow a longer glimpse  beyond  your still radiant nights.


Written 7/1/2018 Patina Contest   Judged 7/3/2018
For Broken Wings'  A Poem Na'd In A July Contest 
Submitted   7/26/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 7/29/2018 5:07:00 PM
Nette, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned poem, well done !
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Date: 7/28/2018 1:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. Your expressions and descriptions are amazing and enviable. Enjoyed.
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Date: 7/27/2018 3:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win,Nette, a winner in quite a few . I enjoyed reading this beautiful well written verse. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/27/2018 3:14:00 PM
Congratulations on a most deserving first place Nette. I celebrate with you on this poem garnering the top spot! : )
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Date: 7/4/2018 8:23:00 PM
I'm always in awe of your beautiful words. Please accept an italian hug and best of luck in the contest!
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Date: 7/3/2018 1:00:00 PM
Your vocabulary is amazing.. So many great lines in this one..
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Date: 7/2/2018 9:20:00 AM
A great poem , again.The poetic interpretation of a subject like Patina is marvelous. Love.Hugs>rajat
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Date: 7/1/2018 10:11:00 PM
Hey Girl.. you know me well. Too much time in a suitcase but I turn it to adventure. I have hidden gems all over the World. Some I've shared with my team and others only I've experienced. This write of yours is amazing. I don't know how you do it. The scenes must be so vivid in your mind. So many incredible lines but this one was a fav.. "and gaze longingly at the rainfall of your skies." I hope you are well in every arena. Your pen, as always, has me mesmerized!
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Date: 7/1/2018 5:53:00 PM
Beautiful write Nette...GL in the contest..
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Date: 7/1/2018 4:02:00 PM
awesome take on the patina contest prompt, nette.
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Date: 7/1/2018 12:35:00 PM
Delightful imagery in your poem, nette...well articulated verses flow brilliantly in layers of autumn..best for a win.
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Date: 7/1/2018 12:14:00 PM
It will be here before you can blink, nette. Very well written as per usual. Good luck:)
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Date: 7/1/2018 10:43:00 AM
A very deep meaning verse Nette, so well written. Good luck. Greetings from Turkey. Tom.
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