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she hung her sari out on a hilltop clothesline wisps of colours to the sun playful lengths of silk toying with the breeze flowing swaying dancing no fanfare no introduction no applause just the unexpected gift of an exquisite peaceful moment of breathtaking beauty on a sunny april morning

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Date: 8/6/2025 11:47:00 PM
What a serene, cinematic moment—this piece sways like the sari itself, full of grace and quiet awe. Absolutely lovely.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/7/2025 4:55:00 AM
Thank you very much, Rowena ~ most appreciated
Date: 8/6/2025 4:14:00 PM
stunning words...you've painted a beautiful image with your words that made for a compelling read.
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Date: 8/7/2025 4:54:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sara ~ most appreciated
Date: 8/6/2025 3:49:00 PM
breath taking beauty indeed Line - dont need any illustration with this little gem, I can see it so clearly in my minds eye:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/6/2025 4:11:00 PM
Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, Jan ~ have a lovely day

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