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Christmassy Treat

Adorned in her Christmas Eve negligee, on a promise for her Christmassy treat
Dog-tired Mr Claus, his mojo stuck on pause, left Mrs C feeling incomplete

Written 18.12.2018

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/20/2021 9:31:00 AM

A fun/cute write. Maybe Mrs C. should go with him on his over night ride. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................

Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/23/2021 3:14:00 PM

Haha... yes maybe she should ~ many thanks dear friend with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/22/2021 10:56:00 PM

Poor Mrs C. But she should have realized the work he had to do. ~~

Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/23/2021 2:53:00 PM

haha... yes Christmas Eve of all nights... kindest thoughts Ann xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/22/2021 11:48:00 AM

Lol, he had a good excuse Ann, having to travel all over the world delivering presents. Good luck in the contest. Hope you're keeping well. Tom

Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/23/2021 2:51:00 PM

Many thanks Tom, I hope it's not too saucy, haha... I am still suffering from my shoulder pain, but keeping positive and I hope you and your family are well too. With kindest thoughts Ann xx