Ann Gilmour Poet Couplet

Christmassy Treat

Adorned in her Christmas Eve negligee, on a promise for her Christmassy treat
Dog-tired Mr Claus, his mojo stuck on pause, left Mrs C feeling incomplete

Written 18.12.2018

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Paula Goldsmith December 20, 2021 at 9:31 AM A fun/cute write. Maybe Mrs C. should go with him on his over night ride. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022....................... Ann Gilmour December 23, 2021 at 3:14 PM Haha... yes maybe she should ~ many thanks dear friend with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Victor Buhagiar November 22, 2021 at 10:56 PM Poor Mrs C. But she should have realized the work he had to do. ~~ Ann Gilmour November 23, 2021 at 2:53 PM haha... yes Christmas Eve of all nights... kindest thoughts Ann xx

Tom Cunningham November 22, 2021 at 11:48 AM Lol, he had a good excuse Ann, having to travel all over the world delivering presents. Good luck in the contest. Hope you're keeping well. Tom Ann Gilmour November 23, 2021 at 2:51 PM Many thanks Tom, I hope it's not too saucy, haha... I am still suffering from my shoulder pain, but keeping positive and I hope you and your family are well too. With kindest thoughts Ann xx