Christmas Wreath

19 December 2010

Christmas Wreath

C  ircle band of lights indicating halo
H  alo of hope to continue the whole year round
R  ound in shape flows youthful spirit to ingest
I  ngesting a strong hold to never separate
S  eparation comes when leaves fall and lights were taken
T  aken from ancestors to mundify
M  undify a sagging spirit in a genial abask
A  bask we get skylight kindling satisfaction 
S  atisfaction to be God’s creation in this world

W  orld as a whole is the people in a raceme 
R  aceme with flowers on stalks that entwine
E  ntwine fresh wounds to heal  and feel amorous
A  morous display in every life’s threshold 
T  hreshold for welcoming visitors every hour
H  ours countdown soon will be Christmas and New Year to share with everyone


Merry Christmas to all.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 12/28/2010 10:03:00 AM
And Merry Christmas back to you Noel :) I hope you had a wonderful celebration! & also a happy New Year! Very nice acrostic you have here enjoyed how you used unique words for some of your words :) -- nikko :)
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Date: 12/22/2010 7:31:00 AM
Simply wonderful and very unique, I enjoyed.. Dana'lynn
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Date: 12/21/2010 12:15:00 AM
The message of the wreath's meaning at Christmas time works so well in an acrostic form, Noel. You did a splendid job for Dr. Ram's contest and I'm sure he'll love the way your poem lifts any "sagging spirits" that may not appreciate the symbolism of the circle of creation. Best wishes in the contest and have a wonderful holiday. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/20/2010 6:17:00 PM
oops, sorry, I may have confused you with some other guy who has already written at least two wreath poems. It looks to me now like this is your first one. You must have made the deadline for the contest in the nick of time! Good luck if it's in the contest. See ya, Noel!!
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Date: 12/20/2010 6:16:00 PM
Hey, that is quite a wreath, Noel. Now you have one that is acrostic as well. So is THIS one in the contest?? I think you are "hung up" on wreaths now!! Merry Christmas to you. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 12/20/2010 11:39:00 AM
Nice wreath of love and emotions with faith you have penned, Noel
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Date: 12/20/2010 10:35:00 AM
This is beautiful, Noel! Well-written and I love the way you repeat end line words. This reinforces each word in the sentences. Thank you for sharing and I wish you the best in the contest-if it' for the contest, it will do well! I'm sending you and your family Christmas greetings and best wishes for the coming New Year! Blessings, peace, joy and love, Audrey
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Date: 12/20/2010 9:26:00 AM
An amazing and brilliantly written poem Noel.. vivid and visual lines and bright atmosphere about the wording.. blessed message my friend.. enjoyed and good luck if u entered in the contest by Dr. Ram..luv..
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