Christmas With Christ - Melchoir's Story

Christmas with Christ – Melchoir’s Story
Wondrous symbols and signs appear in the heavens, heralding that an amazing event is about to happen… the birth of a royal child in the town of Bethlehem, one who will transform the world and make it whole again.
Guided by the light of a strange brilliant star, I and my companions travel by night from afar. We come to pay homage to this newborn Jewish King, this Prince of Peace who will save our world from sin.
We wonder, how can this be, when all we see are such wretched signs of abject poverty? Joseph, Mary, and Lord Jesus, the little Baby, sheltered with oxen, sheep, and lamb in a stable.
But we three kings humbly fall on our knees in wonder, bowing our heads and giving our hearts to this Babe so tender. Sensing we’re in the midst of a divine, royal presence, Gaspar, warm brown eyes aglow, gifts Him rare frankincense.
Noble Balthazar, his dark chocolate skin glistening, presents Him with aromatic, rich myrrh, for anointing; and I, Melchoir, entranced by this miraculous sight, bring precious gold to worship Him, this Child of Light.
Holding the Babe in my arms, there're no words to be said; but as I cuddle Him closely, I’m overcome with intense dread. For in a vision, I can clearly see Him suffering years ahead; He’s nailed to a wooden cross, wearing a bloodied crown of red.
Impulsively, I’m tempted to hide Him in my warm cloak of gold, and help Him escape from a fate that’s been foretold. While history will see me as only one of Three Wise Men, none will ever know that I could’ve changed fate right then.
But wisely I realize that it’s not for me to decide whether this innocent Child shall live or be crucified. I only know I must not interfere, but leave Him to fulfill His Messianic destiny, by carrying out God’s divine will.
So while sadly, reluctantly, for the Orient I must depart, I also leave with happiness and great hope in my heart, as my vision also revealed, there’s redemption in His blessed birth; and there'll be good will toward all men and Peace on Earth!
11-22-2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 7/11/2018 6:39:00 PM
Peace and God's Blessings to you and yours. Fabulous!!!!
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/11/2018 9:00:00 PM
My friend, it's great to hear from you. Thank you for visiting and leaving me your blessings and great compliment which I appreciate! Best regards. Pandita
Date: 6/26/2017 8:47:00 AM
This is a beautifully written story Pandita. I enjoyed it very much.
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/30/2017 12:54:00 PM
James, thank you so much, my friend! I always enjoy your visits! Have a wonderful weekend! Pandita
Date: 12/2/2015 12:44:00 PM
A wonderful poem Pandita. I love the eighth stanza: But wisely I realize that it's not for me to decide; sometimes I think I can do more when all I need to do is get out of God's way.
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/4/2015 9:01:00 AM
Hi Lara, thank you so very much for stopping by and for leaving your highly complimentary words which mean a lot to me! Truly, in challenging times, we can definitely be better off by allowing God's will to be done. Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 12/1/2015 4:28:00 AM
Such a unique take on that Divine event from the viewpoint of one of the wise men, especially the verses about the vision of His suffering and Melchoir's ultimate submittal to God's will... It is obvious that you know your Bible well my friend...Merry Christmas dear lady! - Tim
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/1/2015 12:05:00 PM
Dear Tim, thank you so very much for your great insightful comments and compliments! With this one, while I wanted to remain true to the biblical account, I still wanted to use a little creativity and poetic license to share Melchoir's story. I am delighted that you like it! A very Merry Christmas to you and yours, my friend! Pandita
Date: 11/29/2015 1:42:00 AM
Excellent. A beautiful rendition of Christmas. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 11/29/2015 10:22:00 PM
My friend, it is so nice to receive your wonderful complimentary words! Ravi, thank you so much for the visit! Pandita
Date: 11/26/2015 3:32:00 PM
A truly lovely poetic narration of this important page in the history of mankind, Pandita. Love the angle from which you capably tackled it. Already, Christmas spirit is in the air:) All the best. // paul
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 11/27/2015 10:04:00 AM
Hi Paul, many thanks my friend for stopping by with your wonderful compliments which always uplift me and give me courage to keep on trying! Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 11/23/2015 7:13:00 AM
Wondrously written my friend, an epic write....Super 7 and good luck in that contest!!
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Date: 11/23/2015 7:17:00 AM
You left me with a wide smile on my face:-)! Thank you for brightening up my morning with such praises! Have a wonderful day, dear Robert!
Date: 11/22/2015 10:56:00 PM
Hope You will have a great Christmas forever Pandita sis
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Date: 11/23/2015 6:57:00 AM
Hi Samia, thank you, my dear for stopping by with your beautiful comment! Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 11/22/2015 8:02:00 PM
A beautiful rendition of Christmas Pandita! Hugs!
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Date: 11/23/2015 6:56:00 AM
Arthur, thank you so much, my friend! I always enjoy your visits! Have a wonderful week! Pandita
Date: 11/22/2015 5:55:00 PM
Oh my, Pandita, this is a brilliant masterpiece that you have created. Telling the Christmas story from the perspective of Melchoir, one of the Three Wise Men, is absoultely genius! You gave him an active voice and creatively portrayed him as a significant actor in the story who had personal, insightful thoughts about the Christ-Child! It's a 7 from me and good luck in the contest! Kika
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Date: 11/22/2015 5:58:00 PM
Good Evening, Kika. Thank you for thinking so highly about this piece. I really wanted to do something creative and I am happy that you enjoyed my workd. I wish you a wonderful week ahead! Pandita
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