Brenda Meier-Hans Poet Verse

Christmas Wishes Musettle

Christmas 
lights everywhere 
bring peace 

Peaceful 
angels look down
to earth 

Earthly 
delights bringing 
many gifts

Gifting
those in need and
be kind


Kindness
comes from a heart
loving

Love that
has no fence or
boarders 


******Richards express leaving the station******
11.30.2014
Contest: Musettle Train

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Poet Destroyer A January 11, 2015 at 9:02 PM Nice win...PD

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 9, 2015 at 10:29 PM I love the Christmas message, Brenda, and the last stanza is perfect! Congrats to you...hugs, Rhonda

Abdul Malik Mandani January 6, 2015 at 12:03 PM "Love that has no fence or borders" Very nice. Congrats.

Kayod5 Kayode January 5, 2015 at 11:49 PM Nicely crafted,congrats Brenda...huggs

Sandra Haight January 5, 2015 at 5:15 PM Hi Brenda, congratulations on your win! I love the message you delivered in your train ride! Hugs, Sandra

Paul Callus January 5, 2015 at 4:51 PM One very enjoyable ride, Brenda! Very fittingly written for Christmas time. Congrats on your deserved win. // paul

Jan Allison January 5, 2015 at 4:04 PM Dropping back with my congrats Brenda:-) Hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux January 5, 2015 at 3:38 PM I think this is one of the best. If not for stanza 4, I would have rated this one much higher.

Sara Kendrick December 4, 2014 at 8:54 AM Good one...Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara..Love has no borders for sure.. Brenda Meier-Hans December 5, 2014 at 9:22 PM Thanks Sara

Andrea Dietrich December 2, 2014 at 3:11 PM i see you jumped on a christmas musettle train!! Sweet one. Brenda Meier-Hans December 3, 2014 at 6:49 AM Thank you Andrea

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders December 1, 2014 at 3:36 PM I love the Christmas theme, Brenda! I enjoyed reading this afternoon...hugs, Rhonda Brenda Meier-Hans December 3, 2014 at 6:48 AM Thank you Rhonda

Casarah Nance December 1, 2014 at 3:25 PM Cheers! Wonderful thoughts a wonderful christmas it will bring! :) Brenda Meier-Hans December 3, 2014 at 6:48 AM Thank you Casarah

Monterey Sirak December 1, 2014 at 7:38 AM How nice, a poem infused with the true spirit of Christmas Brenda Meier-Hans December 3, 2014 at 6:47 AM Thanks Monterey

Eileen Manassian November 30, 2014 at 10:22 PM Isn't this sweet!!! :) Richard will be pleased. A Christmas theme makes it lovely...Gifting...you gift us your poetry. Hugs Brenda Meier-Hans December 3, 2014 at 6:46 AM Thanks Eileen

Eve Roper November 30, 2014 at 10:15 PM Good luck on the contest, Brenda," Love has no fence or boarders" well said. 7 blessings to you my friend eve Brenda Meier-Hans December 3, 2014 at 6:46 AM Thank you Eve.

David Meade November 30, 2014 at 8:59 PM The polar express -- all aboard!! very lovely. Brenda Meier-Hans December 3, 2014 at 6:45 AM Thanks David.

Cupids Arrow November 30, 2014 at 5:55 PM Is this the Christmas train? ...C-->A Brenda Meier-Hans November 30, 2014 at 6:14 PM Yes Cupid. Get on board.

Dorian Petersen Potter November 30, 2014 at 5:51 PM Excellent pen Brenda! Enjoyed it! A 7 for you! :) love and hugs! xxxD. Brenda Meier-Hans November 30, 2014 at 6:14 PM Thanks so much Dorian.

Richard Lamoureux November 30, 2014 at 5:50 PM I also want to say thanks for being one of the first to try it out. Hugs Rick. Brenda Meier-Hans November 30, 2014 at 5:52 PM Thanks Richard, I enjoyed writing this.

Richard Lamoureux November 30, 2014 at 5:48 PM I really enjoyed the Christmas Express! On Car 5 change "of love" to "loving". The form requires using a variation of the word at the beginning of the next car. Brenda Meier-Hans November 30, 2014 at 6:14 PM Thanks Jan. XOXO

Jan Allison November 30, 2014 at 5:31 PM tooot tooot so glad you jumped on the train Brenda - good luck:-) Hugs jan xx