Christmas Windows - Building a Snowman

When the snow is deep and wet enough to pack
I look out my living room window to watch kids build a snowman
Wouldn't you know    that old felt hat is gone from the closet    and
My meerschaum pipe (this will never do) gone from the rack
Robert has given his own red scarf
While little Sue    with not another thing to do
        has stolen the black lids off our plastic coffee cups
Never have I seen those kids work with such love's labor
The man is rolled and packed together before I can tire
It is just noon    and    typical Denver
The sun is out    thermometer way up!
So    before the kids can sigh the melt
I pop out the door and cry,  "What a wonderful snowman!
This calls for a reward!"    Then I ease on him my favorite tie
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Dietrich Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 8:18 AM
what a precious poem, DAver. So you lived in Denver? And I don't recall ever asking you. YOu had children then?? I will see your other window poem, that way I can remember I saw them all! LUv, Andrea
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September 29, 2009 at 3:03 PM
Reminds me of my childhood and has me smiling. Thanks for the day brightener! Hope we don't get as much snow as last year this upcoming season. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Have a good evening! Karen
Buys Avatar
December 29, 2008 at 7:55 AM
Absolutely lovely, made me smile at the sheer whimsy in this poem. Very well done. Regards Heidie
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
December 27, 2008 at 4:56 PM
This is my first "formal" snowman. God Bless Daver. Merry Christmas. Vince
Reynolds Avatar
December 22, 2008 at 3:38 AM
What a joy you are, Daver!!!! This is one of my most favorite things to do with my kids...sometimes the old chill-man even get's bottle caps for eyes when the snow is too deep to find pebbles. lol cheers! Love, Kristin
Gorelick Avatar
December 21, 2008 at 9:29 AM
This caused a nice smile this am..Do you know I've never made a snowman, don't get to the snow often living in sunny(rainy) California. Hope you get a tie for xmas...:). BG
Richards Avatar
December 21, 2008 at 9:02 AM
How cute is this...?? Bless you for giving in and letting Mr. Snowman dress is style! Maybe there will be another tie and pipe for you under the Christmas tree this year (although, I know, sometimes people have their favorites already broken in) God Bless...and Happy Holidays. This one makes me smile! ~LOve, Carrie
Swanson Avatar
December 21, 2008 at 7:04 AM
This is so sweet, I just loved it. I could see the children grabbing the items for their beloved snowman and working tirelessly to make him just right! Wonderful images, really enoyable. God bless and happy holidays! :) Amy
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December 21, 2008 at 6:51 AM
Another terrific write from you Daver. Pictures painted so brilliantly with words. I am there with every word watching this all unfold. Great job!
Winter Avatar
December 21, 2008 at 6:24 AM
Oh Daver, your Christmas Windows are precious and priceless - and so is that big, beautiful heart of yours! May the child in you remain as alive and as shining bright as it is this season. You give so much to the spirit of Christmas and to the child within us all with every write. Merry beautiful wonderful Christmas to you and yours! Love & hugs, Shar xoxo
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