Valsa George Poet Haiku

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June.22.2025

Shaped Haiku Poetry Contest

Sponsor- JCB Brul

~ PLACED FIRST~

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christmas tree

X
*?*
***???***
****????****
*****?????*****
*****??????*****
* *decorate** myself**
with* bright* stars* and* round
** b  a  l  l  o  o  n  s **
***???*****?????******???***
*****????****?????****????*****
*****?????*****?????*****?????*****
!              !                !            !
     @             @              @           @      
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 *signal* to* 
*Christ's* *birth*

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Len Gasun July 4, 2025 at 8:31 PM Wow! A very beautiful Christmas tree and haiku my dear poet friend, Valsa. I love it! Congratulations on your well-deserved first place win too! Thanks a lot for sharing. Hugs and cheers! God bless.

thriveni c mysore July 2, 2025 at 7:03 PM lovely. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!

Linda Alice Fowler July 2, 2025 at 7:26 AM Love your characteristic tree Valsa. Congratulations! :)

Andrea Dietrich July 1, 2025 at 11:12 PM Back again with my congrats

Speaks Volumes July 1, 2025 at 7:08 PM This is adorable Valsa. Well deserved place.

Andrea Dietrich June 26, 2025 at 9:24 AM So cute. Is it for one of Brian's contests?

Ink Empress June 26, 2025 at 2:25 AM Wow how did you do that??? I would love to create a shape like that so beautiful dear valsa! I am in awe of your artistic skills and i think this deserves a huge win! Top winner it must be as youv put so much effort and time into presenting something so impressive! I cant help but praise this! Best wishes! Sending you light always

Paula Goldsmith June 22, 2025 at 12:28 PM What a creative/fun write you have here. Love It... This would make a great card to send out at Christmas time. "Good Luck" Have a fun day writing away..........

Sotto Poet June 22, 2025 at 11:42 AM Very nicely crafted visual haiku, Valsa. Your tree is well-adorned and attractive. Best wishes for the contest.

Kim Rodrigues June 22, 2025 at 10:30 AM LOVE this ONE! I love the symbols you decorated it with. Would not have thought to put question marks and at symbols!

Anne-Lise Andresen June 22, 2025 at 7:43 AM - This was a beautiful Christmas tree, Valsa :) - hugs

Hiya Sharma June 22, 2025 at 7:09 AM A pretty shape poem this is, my dear poetess! How creative and ingenious, radiating such celebratory vibes that not only feel like a treat for the senses but also for the heart! Love the Christmas theme that you've chosen and this is very well executed! Best wishes in the contest, sweet soul. I have been unwell in these past days, still recovering and slowly catching up here. Missed reading your work!