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June.22.2025

Shaped Haiku Poetry Contest

Sponsor- JCB Brul

X *?* ***???*** ****????**** *****?????***** *****??????***** * *decorate** myself** with* bright* stars* and* round ** b a l l o o n s ** ***???*****?????******???*** *****????****?????****????***** *****?????*****?????*****?????***** ! ! ! ! @ @ @ @ || || || *signal* to* *Christ's* *birth*

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/22/2025 12:28:00 PM

What a creative/fun write you have here. Love It... This would make a great card to send out at Christmas time. "Good Luck" Have a fun day writing away..........

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/22/2025 11:42:00 AM

Very nicely crafted visual haiku, Valsa. Your tree is well-adorned and attractive. Best wishes for the contest.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/22/2025 10:30:00 AM

LOVE this ONE! I love the symbols you decorated it with. Would not have thought to put question marks and at symbols!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/22/2025 7:43:00 AM

- This was a beautiful Christmas tree, Valsa :) - hugs

Hiya Sharma

Date: 6/22/2025 7:09:00 AM

A pretty shape poem this is, my dear poetess! How creative and ingenious, radiating such celebratory vibes that not only feel like a treat for the senses but also for the heart! Love the Christmas theme that you've chosen and this is very well executed! Best wishes in the contest, sweet soul. I have been unwell in these past days, still recovering and slowly catching up here. Missed reading your work!