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Christmas Surprise

Fire blazes dancing salsa in the chimney
Stars twinkling gracefully on the Christmas tree
She un-wraps the oddly big box, clapping her hands 
Screaming as a puppy pokes his furry head out of the pack!


November 20, 2015
Rahy Hy

For the contest, Trashed  #4, sponsor, Broken Wings.

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Constance La France

December 3, 2015 at 3:31 PM

Rahy, to activate your soup mail, go to your profile page and just click on soup mail and update at the bottom, should work. It does take time to learn how to navigate the site.

Constance La France

December 3, 2015 at 2:50 PM

Rahy, this is a lovely poem, I love it, the only reason it did not place in my, A Christmas Memory contest, is because of the title, it had to be, A Christmas Memory. Now I see you have entered it in my Trashed #4 contest, I prefer to not accept poems from my own contests, do you have another you could enter, if not well I will think about what to do, sorry I am telling you all this in your poetry comment box but you do not have soup mail activated.

Rahy Hy

December 3, 2015 at 2:55 PM

By the way, I have no idea how to activate my soup mail....I am gradually finding my ways around here. :)

Rahy Hy

December 3, 2015 at 2:54 PM

Hi Broken Wings, Thanks for letting me know. Not a big deal! As long as my poems are read, I am content :) It's totally ok if you have to disqualify it. Rules are rules.. Your compliment is worth more than any contest placement... love, Rahy

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