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Christmas

Snow

Christmas Snow

Wanted to write a Chastushka
But Christmas snow dampened my hair
So I took out my babushka
And said, “Let it snow, I don’t care!”




* December 18, 2020
For Andrea’s Chastushka Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Horne Avatar
June 9, 2021 at 11:56 AM
LOL, love your sense of fun
Devonshire Avatar
June 11, 2021 at 11:49 AM
Is that smile similar to Mum's? When I saw the photo, I thought of her.
Horne Avatar
December 28, 2020 at 12:45 PM
LOL, so glad this was a winner, hon
Allison Avatar
December 27, 2020 at 3:26 PM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Carolyn:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
December 27, 2020 at 10:32 AM
Congratulations on your win, Carolyn. Happy New Year. Hugs Eve
Goldsmith Avatar
December 26, 2020 at 10:53 AM
Congratulations on your win. Snow and hair do not go together. You have a cute write here. Sometimes one needs to say, "I don’t care!” Enjoy your win with blessings......................
Devonshire Avatar
December 27, 2020 at 8:56 AM
Hope you are having a wonderful holiday season, Paula! Thanks for reading.
Callus Avatar
December 26, 2020 at 2:33 AM
This is definitely one of the best entries I have come across, Carolyn! Let it snow for Christmas:) congratulations on placing first in Andrea's contest. Hugs // paul
Dietrich Avatar
December 24, 2020 at 5:24 PM
the capchta was YUK, kind of matching with the picture you showed!!
Dietrich Avatar
December 24, 2020 at 5:24 PM
this is EXCELLENT, Carolyn. Wow, had no idea you entered my contest. What a great rhyme for chastushka!! Congrats.
Devonshire Avatar
December 26, 2020 at 8:39 AM
Thanks, Andrea. My Polish grandmother always wore her babushka and tried to get me to wear one as well. Hope you had a great Christmas!
Proxenos Avatar
December 24, 2020 at 12:13 PM
Hi Carolyn, I must admit I had never heard of a babushka but I looked it up, and thought your Chastushka was really cute and creative and fun. Especially the pic! Have a wonderful Christmas Day tomorrow Carolyn and may you be blessed always. Love and hugs, Jennifer.
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December 21, 2020 at 3:11 PM
Creative way to go for the contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Thanks for the visit to my page. We heard from Tommy's cousin today and he is off the respirator. Good news. Sara
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December 21, 2020 at 11:54 AM
- ... let it rain, I don’t care ... we have had rain for 2 months ...and it will guarantee rain at Christmas too ... love the photo, Carolyn :) - Have a wonderful Christmas ... and a virus-free new year 2021 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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December 20, 2020 at 4:09 PM
Great first poem for me to read since being away from the Soup for a stretch. Good levity my dear l! (My girlfriend saw the pic and almost peed!). I shall post a new poem soon... Love always Keith:)
Balasubramanian Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 4:35 AM
Thanks for making me laugh both write and photo very funny. Still laughing:))
Mcintosh Avatar
December 19, 2020 at 7:35 PM
So cute - wonderful entry. God B L E S S you always
Theraven Avatar
December 19, 2020 at 5:35 PM
Carolyn, Keep your sunny side up! You're Sweet babushka knitting stockings by the fireplace? Not this Christmas. -Richard
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 19, 2020 at 5:25 PM
I am familiar with the word babushka Carolyn and thought it was perfect for your poem. Cute and funny photo to go with your poem. I hope you are well? I am still catching up on paperwork but enjoying the Christmas spirit, though seeing Santa and Mrs. Claus wearing masks at the mall was a downer. Blessings xxoo
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December 20, 2020 at 9:58 AM
Connie, I just received word that my brother's wife died. She had colon and liver cancer diagnosed in November, but the rest of the family didn't know until now. I'm glad you are doing well, Hon.
Allison Avatar
December 19, 2020 at 4:09 PM
love the poem and the pic is hilarious:-) hugs Jan xx
Canerdy Avatar
December 19, 2020 at 1:49 PM
Great poem, hilarious photo, Carolyn! Janice
Devonshire Avatar
December 19, 2020 at 2:27 PM
Unfortunately, there's only one word the rhymes with Chastushka. In North America, the babushka is a kerchief. In eastern Europe, it refers to an old woman. Have a merry Christmas!
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December 19, 2020 at 5:59 AM
Ha ha, great poem and I like the photo. Merry Christmas Carolyn.
Devonshire Avatar
December 19, 2020 at 3:01 PM
Merry Christmas to you as well, Richard, and thanks for reading!
Pandit Avatar
December 18, 2020 at 3:14 PM
Fun read Carolyn--the photo paints your poem. Cleverly done.
Devonshire Avatar
December 19, 2020 at 2:25 PM
Actually, the photo inspired the poem. Thanks for reading, Vijay. I hope you have a very happy holiday season!
Logan Avatar
December 18, 2020 at 1:36 PM
Loving the photo and the lines. Fun piece, Carolyn.
Y. Avatar
December 18, 2020 at 12:34 PM
Lol! Carol, This is a great entry for the contest theme. The photo is funny too. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis
Hinshaw Avatar
December 18, 2020 at 12:23 PM
Carolyn, a splendid and witty entry for the contest - lols! A top winner for sure. Loved the dear old lady sticking her tongue out at us! Bob
Devonshire Avatar
December 18, 2020 at 12:25 PM
LOL The photo inspired the poem. Merry Christmas, my friend!
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