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Christmas Mourning

I cuddle a porcelain jar within my bosom My womanly soul yearns for your eyes Tracing Christmas eves spent moon- gazing, Your fingers busy plucking a violin As we giggled, hummed through knolls of snow: Had I known that on an exact hour A crooked cane would roll away without notice-- Bent against the ice of heaven while faint stars Temper your breath in haste... my own hymns Would not have stopped their refrains... But there is an open skyline which leads Grandfathers like you to rest by their own will... And I cry among rosy poinsettias Gliding by the shore: It is near the 25th; Your ashes spilling now on waves where you belong, Mourning for all life's twinkles... My frozen moment adrift ~ December 2018 Contest for Brian Strand

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Date: 12/7/2018 6:02:00 PM
Wow, this is lovely, Nette- I relate by my own fondness for my Nana and Pop-pop--and that 2nd stanza is just magnificent!Congrats on your win.
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Date: 11/30/2018 12:20:00 AM
Beautiful, Nette - totally captivated me. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 11/28/2018 10:53:00 PM
Your emotional artistry shines in the exquisite essence and imagery of your breathtaking poem, Nette. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/28/2018 1:20:00 PM
Another one of your shining pieces of art in the form of poetry..very well written with words of gems...best for a win, nette.
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Date: 11/28/2018 12:24:00 PM
Gorgeous, such an enchanting poem though sad, the beauty of your words outweighs the sorrow this expresses. Absolutely beautiful. Best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 11/28/2018 12:15:00 PM
Beautifully written Nette, we look back with fondness' to times gone by and remember those no longer with us. Good luck. Tom.
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