Christmas Mourning

Crystalline sparkling day, translucent night sky,
the harbinger of cheer-laced Christmas time
we celebrated drinking the dregs of cupful joy of heart,
sharing with our long-time neighbor 
since when I didn’t remember,
but the luminous smile of their little daughter,
dancing around the glittering Christmas tree,
I didn't forget and waited the whole year to see.

Christmas came that year on the frozen wings
of the melancholic winds of whispering despair,
blew all the candles out, the light disappeared,
searching for the smile on the face of the girl,
gone away somewhere else unreachable 
to dance and smile in white Christmas splendor.
My heart mourned the void that engulfed 
the dark Christmas night falling on my neighbor.

November 27, 2018
Posted for Contest : Christmas Mourning
Sponsor : PS Awtry
December 9, 2019
Now posted for Contest : Writing Challenge-December, 2019- I Want
                                     Christmas Poems
Sponsor : Dear Heart-Wiishkobi Ode

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Date: 12/15/2019 8:11:00 AM
Subimal congratulations on your win in my Christmas writing challenge with this wonderful poem.
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Date: 12/7/2018 9:52:00 AM
Beautiful, beautiful, so beautiful and as always, your pen writes in the language of kings through a naturally flowing ink.
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Date: 12/4/2018 9:36:00 PM
Congrats, Subimal, on your third place win! So sad.
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Date: 12/4/2018 7:33:00 PM
Such sadness in your well-written poem, Subimal. Congratulations on your fine podium win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/4/2018 2:55:00 PM
very touching imagery Subimal, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/3/2018 11:52:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win! Janice
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Date: 12/3/2018 11:27:00 PM
Thank you so much for writing this beautiful poem and for entering it in my contest. Congratulations on your podium finish!
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