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A Tree O Triangle O XX Decorated XX With clear, white sparkling Lights, angels hover near 'Tis a beautiful sight soooooo Celebrate, stay up late, soon Santa's OOOOOOO Here OOOOOOO OOO Joy, peace OOO XX And good cheer XX OOOO Packages wait OOOO OOO Children curious OOO XX Slip to investigate XX Surprise in their eyes so wide When waiting outside their main prize Bicycle built for two, me and you Crash Bang Bam Piled in a jam A grand slam Never young Again, dame Written: 11/25/2022 For Brian

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Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 11/30/2022 12:22:00 PM

Oh no dear Sara, I hope the "Crash! Bang! Bam!" is not from personal experience, of course, on a bicycle, many of us can relate!!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/30/2022 3:31:00 PM

BJ, We have ridden on a bicycle built for two but we did not have a crash for which I can thank God. We have had bike crashes in the family, and I was one of them. Thanks for dropping by and the concern. Sara

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/28/2022 10:53:00 PM

You are excellent at writing different styles of poetry Sara this Christmas write is a gem. Blessings and hugs Jennifer

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/29/2022 3:56:00 AM

Nice for my work to be called a gem. I need all the blessings I can get. Thanks for the visits, Jennifer. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/27/2022 10:14:00 AM

such a cute Xmas tree shape, Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/27/2022 1:05:00 PM

Why, thank you, Andrea. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Valsa George

Date: 11/27/2022 4:15:00 AM

This is so humorous and enjoyable . The Christmas tree you have shaped and the Christmas adventure you undertook are equally delightful though the latter ended in a fiasco. :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/27/2022 8:01:00 AM

Valsa, We would have to have training wheels and a very slow motor if my husband and I were to use one now. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/26/2022 8:50:00 AM

What a delightfully festive shape poem and funny too! Have a wonderful day, Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/26/2022 10:12:00 AM

Thank you, Line. I appreciate the time spent here reading and commenting on my poem. Sara

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/26/2022 7:50:00 AM

Oh so cute and clever Sara. Congratulations on your win! :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/26/2022 8:20:00 AM

Why, thank you, Linda. Sara

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/25/2022 9:19:00 PM

I'm sure Brian will love it, I know i do..All the best Sara, this is a wonderful poem, and love the shape too! Harry

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/26/2022 3:07:00 AM

Thank you, Harry. I appreciate the kind review of my work. Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/25/2022 9:42:00 AM

Great shape and wonderful thoughts, Sara. Best wishes for a very happy holidays.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/25/2022 1:43:00 PM

Lasaad, Thank you for dropping by and for the best wishes and happy holidays. Sara