Sara Kendrick Poet Shape

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Christmas Morn

 A
Tree
O Triangle O
XX Decorated XX
With clear, white sparkling
Lights, angels hover near
'Tis a beautiful sight soooooo
Celebrate, stay up late, soon Santa's
OOOOOOO   Here   OOOOOOO
OOO Joy, peace OOO 
XX And good cheer XX
OOOO Packages wait OOOO
OOO Children curious OOO
XX Slip to investigate XX
Surprise in their eyes so wide
When waiting outside their main prize
Bicycle built for two, me and you
Crash
Bang
Bam
Piled in a jam
A grand slam
Never young
Again,  dame  

Written: 11/25/2022
For Brian

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Bj Legros Kelley November 30, 2022 at 12:22 PM Oh no dear Sara, I hope the "Crash! Bang! Bam!" is not from personal experience, of course, on a bicycle, many of us can relate!!! Sara Kendrick November 30, 2022 at 3:31 PM BJ, We have ridden on a bicycle built for two but we did not have a crash for which I can thank God. We have had bike crashes in the family, and I was one of them. Thanks for dropping by and the concern. Sara

Jennifer Proxenos November 28, 2022 at 10:53 PM You are excellent at writing different styles of poetry Sara this Christmas write is a gem. Blessings and hugs Jennifer Sara Kendrick November 29, 2022 at 3:56 AM Nice for my work to be called a gem. I need all the blessings I can get. Thanks for the visits, Jennifer. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Andrea Dietrich November 27, 2022 at 10:14 AM such a cute Xmas tree shape, Sara Sara Kendrick November 27, 2022 at 1:05 PM Why, thank you, Andrea. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Valsa George November 27, 2022 at 4:15 AM This is so humorous and enjoyable . The Christmas tree you have shaped and the Christmas adventure you undertook are equally delightful though the latter ended in a fiasco. :) Sara Kendrick November 27, 2022 at 8:01 AM Valsa, We would have to have training wheels and a very slow motor if my husband and I were to use one now. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Line Gauthier November 26, 2022 at 8:50 AM What a delightfully festive shape poem and funny too! Have a wonderful day, Sara. Sara Kendrick November 26, 2022 at 10:12 AM Thank you, Line. I appreciate the time spent here reading and commenting on my poem. Sara

Linda Alice Fowler November 26, 2022 at 7:50 AM Oh so cute and clever Sara. Congratulations on your win! :) Sara Kendrick November 26, 2022 at 8:20 AM Why, thank you, Linda. Sara

Harry Horsman November 25, 2022 at 9:19 PM I'm sure Brian will love it, I know i do..All the best Sara, this is a wonderful poem, and love the shape too! Harry Sara Kendrick November 26, 2022 at 3:07 AM Thank you, Harry. I appreciate the kind review of my work. Sara

Sotto Poet November 25, 2022 at 9:42 AM Great shape and wonderful thoughts, Sara. Best wishes for a very happy holidays. Sara Kendrick November 25, 2022 at 1:43 PM Lasaad, Thank you for dropping by and for the best wishes and happy holidays. Sara