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Dec.3.2023
Christmas Poem Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Constance La France
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"When festive seasons come, I can't but slip into memories of the time I lived with my parents making me feel that unlike photographs, memories never fade and into their faces framed and hung on my mind's wall, I always peer."~ By Poet
Once again Christmas is here, the merry Christmas time, When the church bells at midnight sweetly chime I see streets and houses with Christmas stars adorn, To receive infant Jesus, who in human form was born. As Christmas has come, I think of the vanished bliss, Of the days when life moved like a gentle wind with a sweet hiss, And for us kids, with no trace of sorrow, it was all fun. A time when we got love, care, and attention in ton. Of those days, what all sweet memories I still can weave. All our dear ones from far and wide used to gather on Christmas eve. My mother would be busy cooking the Christmas meal. The aroma of cakes being baked, even from far we could feel. Though there were no presents under the tree to be opened And no fanfare as of now, we were all gladdened, By a pair of new dress for each to be worn to church Over which my siblings and I were excited so much In new dress, it was bliss walking with our parents along the street, For the midnight mass, unmindful of the pain on our feet. Now as Dad and Mom are gone, all I can do for them is to pray, And remember with a thankful heart their love, I can never repay. Festive occasions spark such nostalgia that I always crave for, The warmth I got as a child from my parents who are no more. When I think of my siblings scattered in places, out of reach, A lump forms in my throat that leaves me numb without speech. Our home had been such a beautiful place where there was only light. And the sweet faces of my dear ones for ever stay in me so bright. As waves of memories from the past relentlessly throw back and retreat, Blood calls to blood and their echoes beat hard on the walls of my heart.

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Date: 12/13/2023 12:29:00 PM
Valsa, thank you for entering my Christmas contest, your poem describes such a lovely memory of Christmas, I have memories like these also, congratulations on your win, Constance
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Date: 12/13/2023 9:53:00 PM
Thanks a lot dear Constance for the high placement given for my poem...
Date: 12/9/2023 8:17:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely "Christmas Memories" write/story/quote/ending again.  Have a wonderful day/weekend.................
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Date: 12/6/2023 4:39:00 PM
Beautiful inspiring memories of the love of a family together to remember the reason for the season , hope you have a wonderful time this year as you shower your family with this love, : )
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Date: 12/6/2023 1:29:00 PM
This ends so poignantly. Awesomely rhymed poem.
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Date: 12/5/2023 1:21:00 PM
You just beat a couple of walls of my heart too dear Valsa. A beautiful memory and for some reason I am crying as I write this. I must be in a mushy mood because it really struck a tone with me, that many thousands of miles apart, people all over our world were all celebrating one day in unison and peace. Your Christmases were so like ours we could have been next door. What a splendid poem.
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Date: 12/4/2023 11:04:00 AM
Fond Christmas memories. We miss who are not close by during the holidays. Great poem.
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Date: 12/3/2023 4:20:00 PM
an exquisite poem Valsa. I loved reading about your holiday memories. I, too, enjoy excavating nostalic memories...something soothing and comforting about remembering my happy family and friends. A lump forms in my throat too -- so many relatives scattered so far. I especially liked the last two lines...'their echoes beat hard on the walls of my heart.' Simply elegant and joyful. Am faiving this one. hugs, Sara
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Date: 12/3/2023 8:02:00 AM
Happy memories Valsa, It can be quite emotional when you think of loved ones no longer with us and thinking back to happy get togethers that you used to have. Hope your weekend is going well and good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 12/3/2023 7:32:00 AM
A lovely write/story/quote/ending/picture. Good Luck...  Have a wonderful day..................
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Date: 12/3/2023 5:58:00 AM
Dear Valsa, I am deeply moved by your poem. At times like this, our hearts long for the presence of our loved ones who have passed on. Thankfully, we are fortunate to have treasured memories that stay with us. My dear friend, your use of vivid imagery to express yourself is astounding. It is this joyous piece that gives the greatest joy.
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Date: 12/3/2023 5:41:00 AM
A touching poem dear Valsa, it is always at these times that we miss our loved one who are no longer with us... thankfully we have memories that stay with us.. im not really one for festive celebrations, but you wrote a beautiful poem that rhymes and flows so well.. What is Christmas like in India? I do wonder..
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Date: 12/3/2023 5:22:00 AM
This really is a moving story sweet valsa, i love christmas lights and decorations, although in maldives we only have them in the resorts. However your story made me feel so much from pain in your feet to no presents but being grateful, you really are a beautiful soul, reminiscing and being grateful for your parents and all that they did. Touched my soul deeply. I love this, and i am sure constance will love this one, it is so sincerely written with so much love and emotions, BOL. Fave for me.
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Date: 12/3/2023 5:03:00 AM
Ah... gentle Christmas memories, moments to hold, moments to hold. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
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