Christmas Mashup, Santa Edition

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You know Dasher and Dancer and Frosty and Santa live in The North Pole with the elves and Rudolph. If you be jolly and quick, you'll see Old Saint Nick, rocking around the Christmas tree at night. When the clock is striking twelve don't you fall asleep Down the chimney Santa comes for a snack to eat. All the stockings you will find that decked the halls, mine will be the jolly one going ho-ho-ho!

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Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 12/30/2023 12:36:00 PM

Simply exquisite piece have a blessed new year

Miranda Hawley
Date: 12/30/2023 1:07:00 PM

Thankyou! That was a fun write for me.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/8/2023 10:25:00 AM

The North Pole is now over crowed in a delightful way.

Miranda Hawley
Date: 12/8/2023 10:27:00 AM

Thank you for the comment. Have a great day.

Bill Baker

Date: 12/4/2023 10:19:00 PM

Very creative poetry, Miranda. I like the way you included the North Pole crew, and included the things that happen during the Christmas season. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us through your fine poetry, my friend. Thanks for all your visit and comments on my poetry this last week. :-) Hugs, Bill

Miranda Hawley
Date: 12/8/2023 10:27:00 AM

Thank you very much!

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/3/2023 2:26:00 PM

I am deeply moved by your poem, Miranda. At times like this, our hearts long for the presence of our loved ones who have passed on. Thankfully, we are fortunate to have treasured memories that stay with us. My friend, your use of vivid imagery to express yourself is astounding. It is this joyous piece that gives the greatest joy."

Miranda Hawley
Date: 12/3/2023 2:46:00 PM

I mean the fact that a few songs were going through my head when I wrote this, had literally nothing to do with the fact that both my parents are not living anymore. Glad you enjoyed this one.