Christmas Lantern

Blooms Christmas lantern on their jack fruit tree like the brightest star they admire in their rainbow dreams. To cut Bamboo sticks, under briers they crawled. Night and day, they saw how their Christmas lantern grow. With its bare skeleton, it looked first so hungry, and they saw how it grow. With its yellow attires, they thought it looked so proud. Their sweat swings high now. With their food, and gentle care, it blooms on their Jack fruit tree like their brightest star, kindling their kindred hearts with festive moons.
*A 2nd Place* in the following contest (judged on Dec. 22, 2020) Dec. 15, 2020 Christmas Poems Old or New Poetry Contest Contest sponsor: Constance La France
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La France Avatar
December 24, 2020 at 1:35 AM
Newton, congratulations on your win in my Christmas Poem old or new contest with this wonderful poem, nice image too ! Merry Christmas _Constance
Ranaweera  Avatar
December 24, 2020 at 7:24 AM
Thank you so much for great comment, congrats and the Christmas wishes, Constance!! Wish you Merry Christmas!!
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December 22, 2020 at 11:18 AM
Newton, your "lantern" is truly a gift of light in the darkness. Thank you for sharing your poetic light and congratulations on your win! Merry Christmas!
Ranaweera  Avatar
December 22, 2020 at 3:20 PM
Thank you so much, Sam, for this impressively great comment and the congrats!!
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