Beryl Edmonds Poet Rhyme

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Christmas Jingles 8 - Seven Dwarfs - Seven Gifts

Snow White's Christmas Gifts
When Snow White awoke on Christmas morning
Seven pairs of eyes looked on adoring
Seven gifts there were placed beneath the tree
Each one lovingly wrapped exquisitely.

The seven dwarfs dearly loved Snow White so
All felt that they wanted to let her know
Doc gave a book titled "Take care of self"
He'd been most concerned lately for her health.

Grumpy got his face painted on a mug
So with each sip taken her heart would tug
Happy gave selfies he'd took of himself
To help her feel joyful inside herself.

Sleepy bought her a pretty alarm clock
So when he nods off she'd give him a knock 
One with a chime of a nursery rhyme
It seemed a grand idea at the time.

Bashful was shy so it was no surprise 
He'd written a poem just for her eyes
Sneezy cant shop when the weathers breezy
So he'd made her a badge saying "Squeeze Me."

Last one of all was the gift from Dopey
She couldn't help but just love his baloney
Composure cracked with his card saying that
"Love you to the moon and all the way back.”

Bless 'em all!
8th December 2020

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Susan Ashley December 19, 2020 at 8:45 AM Dear Belle, I adore your enchanting and graceful poem and admire your poetic skills. The rhyme of "Dopey/baloney" was especially delightful! I love Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs. A simply splendid and charming fairy tale of Christmas cheer. Congratulations for your well-deserved honor of POTD! A very worthy choice. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Beryl Edmonds December 19, 2020 at 5:33 PM Dear Susan thank you so much for the heartwarming review and the congratulations. I appreciate your words immensely. Seasons greetings~ Belle

John Watt December 13, 2020 at 12:49 AM So adorable how you took each dwarf's personality and imagined what their special gift to Snow White would be. A real charming write, Belle... big congrats for your POTD honor! Blessings to you ~ John Beryl Edmonds December 19, 2020 at 5:30 PM Thank you John, words and the congratulations I’m most grateful for, poem of the day took me by surprise, but was a pure joy. Blessings to you too - Belle

Connie Marcum Wong December 12, 2020 at 3:57 PM This poem is filled with charm and delightful. Belated congratulations on your deserving POTD honor. Blessings xxoo Beryl Edmonds December 19, 2020 at 5:19 PM Thank you Connie, it was indeed an honour, most unexpected too. Bless you ~ Belle xx

Jennifer Proxenos December 12, 2020 at 5:53 AM Used to write a great many fairy tale poems, but haven't for a while now. This one is right up my alley,so cute, so tender. The last verse was the best for me- my son when he was small, until even now (when he says it with a twinkle in his eye) - said and says love you round the universe and back Mom' Beautiful poem and a well deserved honor bestowed upon you for POTD Belle. Congratulations my friend. Hugs, Jennifer Beryl Edmonds December 12, 2020 at 1:45 PM I would have loved to have read some of your fairy tale poems Jennifer. That’s so beautiful what your son said when he was small and still says to this day. Thank you for what you’ve said about this Christmas jingle and for the congratulations... Hugs, Belle

Tania Kitchin December 11, 2020 at 1:08 PM Belle, sorry I missed this, a cute one, a belated congratulations on POTD! Beryl Edmonds December 11, 2020 at 1:12 PM Thank you very much Tania... all the best, Belle

Regina Mcintosh December 11, 2020 at 7:14 AM Lovely write. God bless you and CONGRATS on POTD :) Beryl Edmonds December 11, 2020 at 8:27 AM Many thanks Regina... God bless you in return, Belle :-)

Eve Roper December 10, 2020 at 8:43 PM Congratulations on POTD, Belle, love fairytale poems :) . Hugs Eve Beryl Edmonds December 11, 2020 at 12:03 AM Thank you Eve, I love fairytale themed poems at Christmas too... Hugs Belle :-)

Unseeking Seeker December 10, 2020 at 8:34 PM Fairyland! Beautiful and congrats on POTD! Beryl Edmonds December 10, 2020 at 11:50 PM Thank you so very much Unseeking Seeker, fairyland at Christmas it is... regards Belle

Akkina Downing December 10, 2020 at 6:49 PM Oh my, what a super awesome poem, Belle, and congratulations on POTD!

Constance La France December 10, 2020 at 5:09 PM Bella, congratulations on receiving POTD with this excellent poem _Constance Beryl Edmonds December 10, 2020 at 5:26 PM Thank you Constance, so much... Belle

Heidi Sands December 10, 2020 at 11:46 AM Congratulations for POTD Belle :) Beryl Edmonds December 10, 2020 at 2:09 PM Thank you very much Heidi, Belle ;-)

Brandy Nicole December 10, 2020 at 11:27 AM This cute and creative Nursery Rhyme belongs in a book. Each gift given is precious in its own way. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Congratulations Belle, on Poem of the Day. Happy Holiday's to you. :) Brandy Beryl Edmonds December 10, 2020 at 11:36 AM Thank you Brandy, a friend has a relative who’s only eight years old and is already writing poetry, I’ve sent her copies of these Christmas jingles, can’t wait to hear of her reaction. Seasonal greeting... Belle :-)

Anitha Jayasankar December 10, 2020 at 7:31 AM So lovely... Congrats on your POTD Belle....Hugs ~ Ani Beryl Edmonds December 10, 2020 at 8:17 AM Thank you so much for that Anitha... Hugs to you too, Belle

Alexis Y. December 10, 2020 at 7:11 AM Hi Belle, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved;-) Alexis Beryl Edmonds December 10, 2020 at 8:16 AM Hi, Alexis, thank you for coming back with your congratulations on poem of the day, it’s a day to remember always... Belle :-)

Jan Allison December 10, 2020 at 6:28 AM Dropping back with my congrats on a very well deserved POTD:-) hugs jan xx Beryl Edmonds December 10, 2020 at 8:09 AM Thank you for looking in again Jan with your congratulations, very grateful... Hugs sent right back, Belle :-)

Victor Buhagiar December 10, 2020 at 6:07 AM A wonderful poem, seven gifts all best for each individual. Perfect rhyming. A poem worthy of a POTD. ~~ Beryl Edmonds December 10, 2020 at 8:14 AM Thank you Victor, very pleased to receive such wonderful comments, it’s made my day unexpectedly special... Best wishes, Belle

Linda Alice Fowler December 10, 2020 at 5:46 AM Adorable write Belle! Congratulations on POTD. Linda Beryl Edmonds December 10, 2020 at 7:56 AM Thank you Linda, most kind and very much appreciated... Belle

Jenna Logan December 10, 2020 at 4:48 AM Belle, your lines are as charming as the gifts for Snow. And you've been gifted with poem of the day! Beryl Edmonds December 10, 2020 at 7:33 AM Jenna, this truly is a gift and coming in the run up to Christmas makes it more precious than ever to me. Thank for your lovely delightful words... Belle

Vijay Pandit December 10, 2020 at 4:40 AM A festive joy to read--congrats Belle on poem of the day. Beryl Edmonds December 10, 2020 at 7:29 AM Thank you so much Vijay, so pleased you enjoyed the festive read. Belle

Mark Koplin December 10, 2020 at 4:25 AM Congratulations on potd! Beryl Edmonds December 10, 2020 at 7:34 AM Thank you very much Mark, this was a delightful surprise. Belle

Tom Cunningham December 10, 2020 at 1:25 AM Back with big congratulations Belle on the well deserved honour of POTD. Tom Beryl Edmonds December 10, 2020 at 1:48 AM I didn’t know Tom, what a wonderful surprise. Thank you... Belle

Gershon Wolf December 8, 2020 at 12:10 PM Cute, sweet, and a Christmas treat. Thanks, Belle. :) Gershon Beryl Edmonds December 8, 2020 at 2:33 PM Thank you Gershon, words so kind, sublime and simply divine :-) Belle

Rico Leffanta December 8, 2020 at 11:49 AM Another great page in your 2020 book! Aloha! Rico Beryl Edmonds December 8, 2020 at 2:29 PM Thank you very much Rico, it’s the last page in the book, but not the last seasonal write coming this way... All the best, Belle

Silent One December 8, 2020 at 11:38 AM Oh my... I think this one is my favourite and the most creative one yet... But I guess you and alot of characters to get in here! Beryl Edmonds December 8, 2020 at 2:05 PM Thank you Silent One, this jingle is my personal favourite and saved it for the last posting, that’s all folk, maybe there’ll be more this time next year. It was fun for me, hope it was for everyone who read the selection... Best wishes, Belle

Jan Allison December 8, 2020 at 8:37 AM oh this is so sweet am adding it to my faves Belle:-) hugs jan xx Beryl Edmonds December 8, 2020 at 8:56 AM That’s so nice of you Jan and I’m pleased that you enjoyed the jingle. :-) hugs Belle xx

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