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One year,  over the ocean, Santa veered  off course His reindeer were battling a hurricane  force.  As the sleigh went  spinning and spiraling around,  an  island appeared far below on the ground, dotted with palms on  a white sandy beach. Santa took heart that land was in reach. Through starlight’s glow and the light of the moon  Santa touched down — not a moment too soon.  A lavish Luau  on Lahaula mats was laid, a sumptuous feast over which a Kahuna prayed  with fish on ti leaves, tropical fruits, and eggs-fu-yung colorful flower leis were draped after being strung Pearly shells glimmered on every waving palm Ukuleles were strumming to songs sweet and calm while dancers swayed ami with soft hula hands. Santa had landed in a paradise found. His beard was snow white, his boots shiny black and he wore a red suit with a red  elfin hat.   “I’m Father Christmas,” and - I’m surprised too  that we celebrate  in much the same way as you   with peace and goodwill, and with eating and singing. ‘Mele Kalikimaka,’ is our song of greeting  As we celebrate Christmas— in island style.  On they kept strumming, and singing and drumming.   while Santa felt tempted to stay and join in.  But time was short as Christmas morning grew near.  He had sworn a duty to all he held dear.  He saw a bright star rising up in the East   The time had come - he must leave from this feast  So he readied his reindeer to take to  the stars  This was the latest —  he’d  ever been — by far   to bring toys to children all over the world  curled up in bed in their little dreamworlds.  “Come Dasher, Come  Dancer, Come Prancer and Vixen.  Come Comet, Come Cupid, Come Donner and Blitzen.”  We’ll find our way here some other midnight   “Mele Kalikimaka  to ALL -  and to ALL a Good Night.”

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Date: 1/19/2024 12:27:00 AM
How wonderfully cute this is, Suzette
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 1/27/2024 4:20:00 PM
Thanks Andrea: When I write about Hawaii I always think of Connie. Luv, SuZ
Date: 12/21/2023 3:24:00 AM
Wonderful storytelling. Merry Christmas. ;0)
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Date: 1/27/2024 4:22:00 PM
Thanks,Richard. January sneaked away on me. SuZ
Date: 12/16/2023 10:23:00 AM
Ahh, so restful with sands and music in the background of a wonderful feast. Celebratory write SuZ. Love it! :)
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/16/2023 11:36:00 AM
Thanks Linda: I have enjoyed your visit to my poems today. Much appreciate your kind words. Hugs, SuZ
Date: 12/7/2023 4:07:00 PM
This is such a beautiful Christmas story for us to enjoy. Thanks for bringing us back to Hawaii, too. I can picture some of it since we were able to enjoy Kaneohe and Honolulu last year.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/7/2023 7:09:00 PM
So glad you could re live some of your memories of Hawaii through my poem. I was a resident for many so years I was considered a Kama’aina . SuZ
Date: 12/5/2023 3:50:00 PM
fantastic storytelling skills, Suzanne! I thoroughly enjoyed your Christmas tale and learning about other Christmas traditions. Lovely creation. Thanks for sharing. enjoy your evening, Sara
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/5/2023 6:04:00 PM
Thanks Sara, I appreciate your kind words and so glad you enjoyed hearing about Christmas in Hawaii. Take care. Hugs, SuZ
Date: 12/5/2023 8:38:00 AM
Oh Suz….such a captivating Christmas tale ….love different traditions and a Hawaiian Christmas sounds wonderful!! Do you ever miss Christmas in Oz? Is Hawaii a amazing place to live…l imagine it would be…..Debx
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/5/2023 12:08:00 PM
How lovely to see you Deb: Yes I do miss Christmas in OZ. Six White Boomers was my favorite Christmas Carol and having a beach picnic for Christmas was always fun. Hawaii was a wonderful time in our lives but we now live in the Blue Ridge Mountains. Every place we have lived I find it is the people that make it nice. Hugs, SuZ
Date: 12/5/2023 5:09:00 AM
Oh wow, this is truly a Fav for me, especially your storytelling skills are so impeccable which kept me enchanted throughout.. A gorgeous Christmas saga with amazing descriptions.. Loved reading this so much! :) It's really profound and unique. So nice to meet you!
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/5/2023 5:44:00 AM
Hello Hiya: I am so happy you enjoyed my Christmas tale and took time to read and leave a lovely comment. Cheers, SuZ
Date: 12/4/2023 9:51:00 PM
A wonderfully told Christmas tale through your delightful poetry, SuZ. A FAV for my list. Merry Christmas my friend, and a Happy New Year! Hugs, Bill
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/5/2023 4:25:00 AM
Nice to carch up with you, Bill. Glad you enjoyed Santa’s unexpected stopover in beautiful Hawaii. SuZ
Date: 12/4/2023 8:05:00 PM
And 'Mele Kalikimaka' to you, Suzanne, for an entertaining take-off on the old standard! :) gw
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/5/2023 4:24:00 AM
Thanks for your visit, Gershon. I had this one up my sleeve waiting for December to post it. I always enjoy a little twist on the Christmas them. Lol SuZ
Date: 12/4/2023 7:57:00 PM
I love these takes on the original Twas the night before poems, absolutely brilliant Suzanne, a fave for me. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/5/2023 4:21:00 AM
I enjoy them too, Tom: I wrote a futuristic one a few years back. Once you get a theme they seem to unfold, in some ways unexpectedly. I am keeping well but busy and hope your health is good too. SuZ

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