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Christmas Dreams

Christmas Dreams

children's heads
think of sleds
in their beds

faces glow
all below
mistletoe

Santa’s seen
Christmas dreams
evergreen


12/28/18


Charlieku 3-3-3 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Charles Messina  2nd place

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/4/2019 3:48:00 PM

Your winning work has such good rhythm to it. Creative way to go for the contest. Congrats. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/2/2019 12:49:00 PM

nice and I enjoyed how you rhymed it too. Congrats on the win, Janis.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/1/2019 11:55:00 PM

- Congratulations on your win in the Charlieku, Janis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina

Date: 1/1/2019 3:43:00 PM

Awesome poetry, Janis. beautiful imagery and I love how you rhymed each line. Congratulations on your placement in my contest. Happy New Year...Charlie