Christmas Day Gift

Whilst walking by the sea at the very crack of dawn
An early morning saunter on this special Christmas morn

Something caught my eye just as I meandered by
It was different, it was still, had it fallen from the sky

As I got a little closer to this tangled mass of weed and shells
I noticed an aroma as I whiffed some very smelly smells

But undeterred by a sound I heard, I swiftly soldiered on
Approaching the mass rather tentatively, nervously humming a song

Removing the tangle of seaweed and shells revealing a shape like a corpse
So still it lay, had it passed away, the shape was so bent and so warped

A red flashing light gave me such a fright, in it's chest as it beat like a heart
Then turning its head, a smile on its face, gave thanks for my helpful jumpstart 

I recognized those deep blue eyes, as I asked him how long he could stay
Walking hand in hand, oh how we laughed; to my home we made our way

Eating jam and cream scones, with strawberries too, enjoying his afternoon tea   
Then we watched with delight way into the night, his film, for he was ET

So with utter delight, talking into the night, we had wine and a bacon baguette
Raising a toast to my Christmas day pet; this magical day I will never forget

But time to go home, for he is ET, his spaceship returning to fly him up high 
I will treasure forever these 24 hours, waving goodbye with a tear in my eye 

26th December 2018
Competition: Christmas Pets
Sponsor: Dear Heart
2nd placement

Contest Name	Podium placing promise(3)
Sponsor Brian Strand
3rd Place

Contest name 'A CHRISTMAS GIFT MEMORY '
Sponsor BJ Legros Kelley
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Goldsmith Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 7:14 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a creative story/write. Love your line, "Eating jam and cream scones, with strawberries too, enjoying his afternoon tea." Sounds so good. Have a blessed day and New Year 2022...........
Gilmour Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 8:21 AM
Bless you dear Paula and so glad you enjoyed my poem. Sending you good wishes for a happy and healthy New Year my friend. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Legros Kelley Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 1:58 AM
Congratulations on your winning placement in the poetry contest, and thank you for your entry! My kids loved ET! Boy those yummy candies sure did become a favorite in our house after that movie came out! I hope you had a merry Christmas and your new year ahead will be filled with all that is good for you and yours!
Gilmour Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 8:18 AM
Many thanks dear BJ for your wonderful contest ~ like the big kid I am I too love ET and love to write about him, haha... thanking you for sponsoring such great contests. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Koplin Avatar
December 24, 2021 at 9:43 PM
Congratulations on your win!
Gilmour Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 8:15 AM
Thank you so much Mark ~ with kindest thoughts Ann xx
La France Avatar
January 1, 2019 at 6:50 PM
Ann, congratulations on your win in my contest with this delightful poem, I love it, well done ~
Gilmour Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 1:52 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely comments and my placement in your competition Dear Heart. I am so pleased you liked my poem, I enjoyed writing it. Kindest thoughts for 2019 Ann xx
Roper Avatar
December 31, 2018 at 11:41 PM
Ann, congratulations on your win. Happy New Year's
Gilmour Avatar
January 1, 2019 at 12:55 AM
Thank you so much Eve, wishing you a happy and healthy 2019. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Krutsinger Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 11:51 AM
What a wonderful missive. You took a chance, helped someone, felt renewed for it, and had a lovely, lovely day. Best of all, you have saved us by teaching us how to get out of our own little "selves" by helping another! Love it from start to finish, Ann.
Gilmour Avatar
December 30, 2018 at 9:38 AM
Thank you Caren for your wonderful comments. Wishing you and yours a very happy 2019, with kindest thoughts Annxx
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