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Christmas Chaos

I saw surreal scenes at the mall: unhinged shoppers in a hot brawl, a tired Santa running away--I'm not funning!-- pursued by kids starting to squall. I finished my shopping and fled. The visions that danced in my head were sugarplums? No way! So ended my rough day. I rushed home and went right to bed. November 30, 2018, entered in Carolyn Devonshire's Christmas Limericks Contest

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Date: 12/7/2018 6:17:00 PM
this is utterly fantastic. One of the best I have seen in this contest. I hope it scored high. Congratulations!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/7/2018 10:47:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea.
Date: 12/6/2018 7:20:00 PM
Janice, oh I could imagine the scene, great write and congratulations on your win in the contest ~
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/6/2018 9:27:00 PM
Thanks so much, Dear Heart! Janice
Date: 12/2/2018 5:09:00 PM
Congrats on your win Janice :)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/6/2018 9:28:00 PM
Thanks so much, Joseph! Janice
Date: 12/2/2018 4:48:00 PM
Sounds chaotic Janice! many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/6/2018 9:29:00 PM
Thanks so much, Jan! Janice
Date: 12/1/2018 5:57:00 PM
G'day Janice … very good Janice. Christmas does have a habit of unexpected surprises - thank you Janice - Canerdy
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/1/2018 8:18:00 PM
Thanks so much, Lindsay. Janice
Date: 12/1/2018 7:46:00 AM
"oooh...we're going to have a griswald christmas..."
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/1/2018 8:21:00 AM
Thanks for the comment.
Date: 12/1/2018 7:03:00 AM
That certainly sounds like chaos..many more days like that yet to come. Well painted scene, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/1/2018 8:22:00 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay. Janice
Date: 12/1/2018 4:43:00 AM
Haha I can just picture the scene Janice, pure mayhem, yet people leave it all till the last minute. Good luck. Tom.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/1/2018 8:22:00 AM
Thanks so much, Tom! Janice
Date: 11/30/2018 11:02:00 PM
Yes! I've had those days too. Well penned, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/1/2018 8:23:00 AM
Thanks so much, Line! Janice

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