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Christmas Cataclysm

Christmas day on planet E
each pine tree
deliciously planted
uprooted

the sky is tinsillated, stars replaced by screwy bulbs

and to top it all off – mind you, like a cherry on top

a fat man in a red suit is flying through outer space

a  U N I V E R S A L  catastrophe
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Lamoureux Avatar
December 24, 2016 at 8:44 AM
Ha ha, a fun one. Merry Christmas.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 24, 2016 at 8:48 AM
Thank you, Richard! Merry Christmas!
Green Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 9:49 AM
okay, I just read the definition, etc. of Vogon and your poem is the best of the worst I have read. It brings to mind the movie Santa Clause meets the Martians.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 1:07 PM
I loved that movie as a kid...lol! Thank you!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 1:06 PM
I loved that movie as a kid...lol! Thank you!
Flats Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 9:29 AM
O U B onna roll! GOTD! (Giggle of the day award). thanks for morning cheer ~ john
Rodrigues Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 9:33 AM
Thank you, John! I'm smiling! See how I drag my feet getting out the door to work! Later!
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